Question

英语短文改错！！~

Tom had a intereting dream last night .In the dream he took part in a race ,At first , he could not run very fast and fell behind ,So he didn't lose heart and keep running.Ali the students on the playground began to cheer him on."Come on!Come on!"He was so great encouraged that he ran faster and fast till he caught up with all the other runners. Finally ,he got the finishing line first and won the race .Many of his classmates gathered around and congratulated him foe his success,They even threw her up into air ....Just at that time he woke up and found himself was still in bed!

Answer 1

所有纠错全部在括号里直接覆盖原文了，而标点符号的错误我直接都改了（英文标点是紧跟单词，然后空一格再写下面的文字）

Tom had (an) intereting dream last night. In the dream he took part in a race. At first, he could not run very fast and fell behind, (but) he didn't lose heart and (kept) running. All the students on the playground began to cheer him on,"Come on! Come on!" He was so (删掉great) encouraged that he ran faster and (faster) till he caught up with all the other runners. Finally, he got (to) the finishing line first and won the race. Many of his classmates gathered around and congratulated him (for) his success. They even threw (him) up into (the) air ....Just at that time he woke up and found himself (删掉was) still in bed!

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