Question

★英语作文（急！！）★

根据汉语提示发挥想象写一篇英语短文：（50-80字）
丹尼和李明正坐在广州开往北京的火车上。他们从车窗看见牛、山羊、大树。他们在车上吃午饭：牛奶面包。下午2点，到达北京火车站。
怎么没人回答啊，真是杯具

Answer 1

话说我的英语不是很好额...
Today is a sunny day ，Danny and LiMing are sitting in guangzhou bound for Beijing on the train now,they are so happy ,and the scenery is very beautiful outside the window ,they seeing the cow from the window, a goat, the tree.They also eat lunch about milk and bread on the train.At 2:00 p.m. and arrives in beijing railway station.
不知道有些时态会不会写着写着就写混了，楼主如果看得懂就自行修改下就ok了吧！

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Answer 2

Danny and LiMingZheng sitting in guangzhou bound for Beijing on the train. They see cows, goats from Windows, trees. They eat lunch in the car, milk and bread. At 2:00 p.m., arrived in Beijing railway station
谢谢采纳，但记得给我分哦！！！多个点。嘿嘿。

追问

Dany and LiMing are sitting on a train,it is from GuangZhou to BeiJing. Look out from the window,they see the cows,the goats and a big tree.There are milk and breads for their lunch,and they will take it on the train.The train will get to BeiJing in 2 o'clock in the afternoon.这个行吗，有语法错误没？如果有，帮我改一下