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书面表达（满分25分）假如你是李华，下星期六是你的生日，你准备在家开一个生日晚会，并邀请部分同学和外

书面表达（满分25分）假如你是李华，下星期六是你的生日，你准备在家开一个生日晚会，并邀请部分同学和外国朋友参加，晚会7：30开始。你家住在英才路（Yingcai Road）228号，乘3路或16路公共汽车在衡水中学站下车。你家就在车站的对面。房子是红色的。门是白色的，很容易找到。请根据所给信息，给你的好友Jack写一封邀请信。注意： 1. 词数100左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3. 开头语和结束语已为你写好。228 Yingcai RoadSeptember 11, 2013Dear Jack, Next Saturday will be my birthday .___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Best wishes.Yours truly,Li Hua

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228 Yingcai Road  September 11, 2013  Dear Jack,      Next Saturday will be my birthday.  I’m going to hold a birthday party at home in the evening. It will start at 7:30. Some classmates as well as some foreign friends are also invited. The activities include singing, dancing and sharing interesting experiences. Surely, we’ll have a good time. I would feel honored if you could come. I live at 228 Yingcai Road. You can take Buses No 3 or No 16 and get off at the stop of Hengshui High School. Just on the opposite of the stop is my house which is red with a white door. I’m sure you can’t miss it. I do hope you will come. Best wishes. Yours,  Li Hua

试题分析：本题为材料作文，在写作之前要注意审题，作文的评分共包括三个方面的内容，即内容，语言，和组织结构分。本题内容陈述较为详细，所以在内容方面，审题较为简单。语言方面要注意对复杂的句型结构，例如倒装，强调等的运用。同时要使上下文衔接，浑然一体。 【亮点说明】所给范文中恰当的使用了Just on the opposite of the stop is my house which is red with a white door.这句话，即倒装句型的运用。这样的句子使得句子的变幻丰富多彩，从而使文章有感染力。 【考点】考查学生语言的综合运用能力