Question

求英语高手帮忙看看我写的几个句子有错吗？万分感谢！

如果我想去贵大学读研究生，请问有什么要求或者我需要准备什么？
If I want to be a graduate student in you university,what are the requirements or what should I prepare?
对GRE成绩有什么要求吗？
Is there any requirement for GRE?
我是济南大学大三的学生，专业是对外汉语。
I am a junior student in Jinan university ,major in teaching chinese as foreign language.
什么专业更加适合我？
What major is more suitable for me？
我希望开阔视野，了解不同的文化，提高英语水平，培养自己的独立能力。
I hope I can expand my horizo,know more different culture,improve my Englishi and cultivate the ability to live dependently.

Answer 1

对GRE成绩有什么要求吗？
Are there any requirements for GRE?我感觉因为是要求嘛不可能只有一个，所以、、、
我是济南大学大三的学生，专业是对外汉语。
I am a junior student in Jinan university,and major course is professional Chinese as a foreign language.
我希望开阔视野，了解不同的文化，提高英语水平，培养自己的独立能力。
I hope I can widen my horizo,know more different cultures,improve my English levels and cultivate the ability of living independently

我感觉这样会比较舒服一点吧，自我感觉是对的~~~~~
要是感觉还行的话就采纳吧，谢谢哈~~~~~

Answer 2

我英语水平不高，但是我有一点可以看出，最后一句culture此处是可数名词，故应为different cultures。

Answer 3

1 .If I want to be a graduate student in you university,what are the requirements or what should I prepare?
改：If I want to be a graduated student of your university,what are the requirements or what should I prepare for?