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请帮我检查英文句子文法 帮我修正为对的句子 (文法要对 句子要通顺)

有附上翻译 好让你们了解我 写些什麼 拜托 帮我把文法改一改 改成对的 句子要通顺 拜托瞜

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Dear mrs Outram:

You ask me what grade I deserve in oral , I world say pass the marks (你问我口试 我应该得到几分 我会说我应该会及格), between 2+ and 3 (在2+ and 3之间), because I didn’t do the best oral for you so far.(因为到目前为止 我并没有为了你做最好的口试) so I guess I will just get between 2+ or 3 for the oral mark this term
(所以我猜想这学期我应该只会得到 2+ or 3 口试成绩)

Whatever , 2+ or 3 is Ok for me so far , ( 不论如何 2+ or 3对现在的我而言 是还可以的) but I hope I can get high marks next terms, (但我希望下一学期可以得到更高的成绩) I will try to do my best oral for you next terms. (下一个学期 我将会为你做最好的口试) by the way , I want thank you for some marks , you were nice to me , because for the other marks , you gave to me high mark than oral marks. (另外一件事 我想谢谢你其它的成绩 你对我是很好的 因为其他的成绩 你给我很高的成绩高过於口试成绩)

You understand me , what levels I can do this , for the next terms. I will try my best for the oral.
Hope you will enjoy my oral during next terms.
(你了解我 我可以做到什麼样的程度 在下一个学期 我将会尝试做我最好的口试 希望你可以享受我的口试在下一个学期)

Answer 1

Dear Ms Outram:

If you ask me what score I should deserve in the oral test, I would like to say that at least I could pass this test and the score might be between 2+ and 3. Considering the fact that I did not express my best potential in this test for some reason, I guess I could only deserve this relatively low score, saying between 2+ and 3 in this semester.
（如果你问我我应该在口语考试中得到什么样的成绩，我倾向于回答说至少应该及格，分数在2+到3分之间吧。考虑到我在口语考试中由于一些因素没有完全展现我最佳的潜力，我觉得我这学期只配得上2+到3分这个较低的分数。）

Whatsoever, I regard that this score for me is appropriate and fair enough so far, and I do hope to get higher score in the next term through my efforts. I give you my word that I would spare no efforts to get well prepared for the oral test in the next semester. By the way, I would like to thank you for the fact that you always treat me nice and give me higher scores in other tests than the oral test which really encourages me a lot.
（不管怎么说，我认为这个分数对我而言是合适且足够公平的，并且我确实希望在下学期通过自己的不懈努力得到一个更加理想的分数。我向您保证，在下一学期中，我会不遗余力的准备好口语考试。另外，我要感谢您，因为您一直待我很好并且在其他科目中给了我比口语考试中更高的分数，这给我很大的鼓励。）

You know to what degree I can do in the tests right now. In the next semester, I hope that you can see my progress and enjoy my speaking in the oral test.
（您是知道我现在能在考试中发挥出什么样的水平的。在下一学期中，我希望您能够见证我的进步并且在口语考试中欣赏我的口语。）

PS：我想了一下，你大概就是想说这些吧，帮你整理的更通顺一些，你可以比对着中文看一下。
希望对你有所帮助~~~O(∩_∩)O~

Answer 2

Dear mrs Outram:

You asked me ahout my oral test , I would say I can pass it (你问我口试 我应该得到几分 我会说我应该会及格), the grade would be between 2 + and 3 (在2+ and 3之间), because I haven't
done best in oral test for you so far.(因为到目前为止 我并没有为了你做最好的口试) I guess I will just get a result that is between 2+ or 3 for the oral this term
(所以我猜想这学期我应该只会得到 2+ or 3 口试成绩)

Anyway , 2+ or 3 is Ok for me so far , ( 不论如何 2+ or 3对现在的我而言 是还可以的) but I hope I can get high marks next term, (但我希望下一学期可以得到更高的成绩) I will try to do my best in oral test for you next term (下一个学期 我将会为你做最好的口试) by the way , I want to
thank you for some marks , you were nice to me , because for the other marks , you gave to me higher mark than oral marks. (另外一件事 我想谢谢你其它的成绩 你对我是很好的 因为其他的成绩 你给我很高的成绩高过於口试成绩)

You understand me , what levels I can be to do this , for the next term. I will try my best for the oral.test
Hope you will like my oral during next term.
(你了解我 我可以做到什麼样的程度 在下一个学期 我将会尝试做我最好的口试 希望你可以享受我的口试在下一个学期)
不知道你要表达什么，甚至你的汉语也很特别，无法理解。为什么是“我并没有为了你做最好的口试”？“希望你可以享受我的口试在下一个学期”又是什么意思?太多不可思议的表达
我只能这样改了

Answer 3

You ask me: I should have some oral I say I should fail, in 2 + between 3 and, because so far I have not to do the best oral examination, so I guess this semester I should only will get 2 + or three oral exam
Regardless of 2 + or 3 to present me is still possible, but I hope next semester can get higher scores, next semester, I will do for you the best oral
Another thing I would like to thank you for other grades you to me is very good because other grades you gave me a very high in the oral exam scores high too
You know I can do next semester what level I am going to try to do my best oral examination, hope you can enjoy my next semester oral exam

我觉得你的句子好多重复的而且不怎么通顺

Answer 4

晕 这是干什么