请高手帮忙看看这有没有语法错误!谢谢了! 如果有更好的改正请指出,会加分的!

Hi!Mynameis....Afteralittleselfintroduction,letmetalkaboutmyidea.Ithinkthereisaveryim... Hi!My name is .... After a little self introduction, let me talk about my idea. I think there is a very important thing about this job——we should let foreign students to know about Chinese culture. I think we can teach a little Chinese to them, because language is the soul in a country. Not only this,An assistant should have excellent organizing ['ɔ:ɡənaiz] ability [ə'biliti] and highly responsibility. If I can get this job, I’ll seriously organize the activities in class and positive completion the task.
I believe they’ll have a good impression about China.
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Hi!My name is .... After a (short 或 brief) self-introduction, let me talk about my idea. I think there is a very important thing about (用to更好一些) this job——we should let foreign students to know about Chinese culture. I think we can teach a little Chinese to them, because language is the soul in a(用one更好一些) country. Not only (about)this,(an 小渣州旦写) assistant should have excellent organizing ['ɔ:ɡənaiz] ability [ə'迹槐biliti] and highly(用higher) responsibility. If I can get this job, I’ll seriously (用 carefully 更好一些) organize the activities in (用during) (the) class (time) and ( positive不用) completion(用complete ) the (my) tasks.
I believe they’ll have a good impression about China.
整体而言,中国式英语特点太突出。比较典型的完全按照汉语意思组织英语词汇。语义尚可如扰,意境不够。
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我给你发了站内信  麻烦看看还有什么需要改进的地方!急用 追加10分 谢谢了!
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Hi!My name is Zhang Xueqian. After a short self-introduction, let me talk about my idea(用opinion更好一些). An assistant should have excellent organizing ['ɔ:ɡənaiz] ability [ə'biliti] and higher (加上sense of)responsibility. If I can get this job, I’ll (用I would)carefully organize the activities during the class time and complete my task (用tasks).
Not only about this. I think there is a very important thing to this job——we should let foreign students to know about Chinese culture. I think we can teach a little (用some 好一些) Chinese to them, because language is the soul in one country.
I believe they’ll have good memory (仍然用impressions 好一些)of China.
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1, let foreign students know
2, teach them some Chinese
3, a soul of a country
4, positively complete the task
5, have good memories about China
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