Question

哪位大神帮忙翻译一下，不要用中国式英语哦⊙∀⊙！

经济的快速发展，带给了我们各种琳琅满目的食物。尽管这给我们的生活带来了极大的实惠，但各种食品安全问题也层出不穷。
三年前，我喝了一杯热咖啡之后，又马上吃了一个放在冰箱中的橘子。不幸的是，第二天早上我感觉很不舒服，而且不想吃任何东西。医生告诉我，我得了胃病。
因为这个原因，我认为我们必须重视食品安全，所以我们有必要掌握一些卫生安全常识。
第一，我们最好少吃垃圾食品和快餐。这会使我们变胖而且不健康；
第二，我们不能吃过期食品和生水。
第三，我们不能随便吃药要按医生的要求，照着说明书服用。
最后，我们必须在吃东西前洗手，因为我们的手上有大量细菌。
俗话说民以食为天只有我们重视食品安全，才能撑起生命的一片蓝天。

Answer 1

The rapid development provids us with varieties of foods.Although this has really brought us great benefits,various problems about food safety have also been brought about.Three years ago,as soon as I drank a cup of hot coffee,I immedietely had an orange frozen in the fridge. Unfortunately,I felt awfully terrible the next morning and didn't want to eat anything. The doctor told me that I had stomach trouble. Because of this,I think we must pay attention to the problem of food safety . And as a result,we have to master some common sense of health and food safety.

追答

Firstly,we had better not have junk food and snacks,which are unhealthy and make us fat.

Secondly,we must not have food which are out of date and water which is not boiled.

Thirdly,we should not take medicine casully ,but do it according to the instructions and follow the doctor's advice.

In the end,we must wash our hands before eating,because there are a lot of bacterias .

As the saying goes,"Bread is staff of the life." Only when we pay enough attention to the prolem of food safety can we enjoy the sunshine from the sky of health.

补充
第一句少了两个词
The rapid development of economy ...

大量细菌，最后一个词多了一个 s.
a lot of bacteria

纯手工翻译。
其余都没问题。

请看看翻译的内容，有需要改进的及时交流。

追问

大神，我好像并没有看到“第一，我们最好少吃垃圾食品和快餐。这会使我们变胖而且不健康；“的翻译

追答

有啊！就是这个
Firstly,we had better not have junk food and snacks,which are unhealthy and make us fat.
为了符合常识，我将语序稍微做了调整。

但是，意思表达绝对没问题。