It was my birthday last Friday. I invite some friends to have dinner with me in one of my favorite
改错。谢谢。。ItwasmybirthdaylastFriday.Iinvitesomefriendstohavedinnerwithmeinoneofmyfavorit...
改错。谢谢。。
It was my birthday last Friday. I invite some friends to have dinner with me in one of my favorite restaurants.It was complete full when we went in,so we had to wait .Luckily,after what seemed tenminutes,a group of tourist at a corner table got up and left off.As we sat down at the table,I noticed a larger brown envelope on one of the chairs .It felt very heavy .Probably it were full of important papers .I handed the envelope to one of the waiters.They hurried down the street after the tourists but managed to catch up with them before they were disappeared . 这个是整段文章的 改10处就好。谢谢!! 展开
It was my birthday last Friday. I invite some friends to have dinner with me in one of my favorite restaurants.It was complete full when we went in,so we had to wait .Luckily,after what seemed tenminutes,a group of tourist at a corner table got up and left off.As we sat down at the table,I noticed a larger brown envelope on one of the chairs .It felt very heavy .Probably it were full of important papers .I handed the envelope to one of the waiters.They hurried down the street after the tourists but managed to catch up with them before they were disappeared . 这个是整段文章的 改10处就好。谢谢!! 展开
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It was my birthday last Friday. I (invited) some friends to have dinner with me in one of my favorite restaurants. It was (completely) full when we went in, so we had to wait. Luckily, after what seemed ten minutes, a group of (tourists) at a corner table got up and left (去掉off). As we sat down at the table, I noticed a (large) brown envelope on one of the chairs. It felt very heavy. Probably it (was) full of important papers. I handed the envelope to one of the waiters. (He) hurried down the street after the tourists (and) managed to catch up with them before they (去掉were) disappeared.
It was my birthday last Friday. I (invited) some friends to have dinner with me in one of my favorite restaurants. It was (completely) full when we went in, so we had to wait. Luckily, after what seemed ten minutes, a group of (tourists) at a corner table got up and left (去掉off). As we sat down at the table, I noticed a (large) brown envelope on one of the chairs. It felt very heavy. Probably it (was) full of important papers. I handed the envelope to one of the waiters. (He) hurried down the street after the tourists (and) managed to catch up with them before they (去掉were) disappeared.
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上周五是我生日,我请来了一些好友跟我一起在我最喜欢的(餐厅?)共进晚餐
你的句子不全,LZ
你的句子不全,LZ
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发生在上个星期五的事,所以应该是invited
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invite 改成invited
complete completelty
went came
after what seemed tenminutes about ten minutes later
tourist tourists
left off. left
It felt very heavy It looked very heavy
Probably Maybe
papers paper
They were hurried to run into the street after the and managed to catch up with the tourists before they disappeared
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~希望对你有所帮助,望采纳~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
complete completelty
went came
after what seemed tenminutes about ten minutes later
tourist tourists
left off. left
It felt very heavy It looked very heavy
Probably Maybe
papers paper
They were hurried to run into the street after the and managed to catch up with the tourists before they disappeared
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~希望对你有所帮助,望采纳~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
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