Question

这句话语法上有没错误？ 顺便翻译下~

This is to notify you that unless we receive your check for $7,000 by June 30。

Answer 1

这句话语法上有没错误？ 顺便翻译下~ 悬赏分：0 | 离问题结束还有 14 天 23 小时 | 提问者：小傻_田and源 | 检举
This is to notify you that unless we receive your check for $7,000 by June 30。

答：有问题
1. 英语的句号用点，不用圈。
2. 宾语从句中缺乏主句。这可能是你漏抄了，下面是原文：如何书写英语催款信

II. SAMPLE

范文

Dear __________:

I am afraid your failure to settle your account, which is over due for more than six months, will leave us with no alternative but resort to legal proceedings.

This is to notify you that unless we receive your check for $7,550.50 by June 30, we will place your account in the hands of our attorneys for collection.

Yours sincerely,

_____________[name]

_____________[title]

Answer 2

句子很有问题
将this is改成it is
that去掉
it is to notify you unless we receive your check for $7,000 by June 30。
这是给你的通告，除非我们在六月30号收到你的7000美元支票；
还可以改成
it is to notify you that we have received your check for $7,000 by June 30。
我们通知你我们已经在6月30号收到你的7000美元支票

Answer 3

received
虚拟语气，用过去式
就此通知你除非我们在6月30日前收到你的7000美元的支票