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请求外贸人员帮我翻译下面一段文字（ 中文 翻译成 英文 ） ，谢谢

在你们确认彩色包装盒设计稿，以及我们收到20%预付款（USD 7056.96）后，才开始算交货期（30天）。
在我们发货前10个工作日之前，我们会把海运费的价格报给你，并在发货前7个工作日之前请付清海运费，我们好安排报关订舱。余下货款（USD16466.24）元，见提单传真件3个工作日内付给我们。
在你们确认彩色包装盒设计稿，以及我们收到20%预付款（USD 7056.96）后，才开始算交货期（30天）。
在我们发货前10个工作日之前，我们会把海运费的价格报给你，并在发货前7个工作日之前请付清海运费，我们再送货到宁波港口。余下货款（USD16466.24），见提单传真件在3个工作日内付给我们。

Answer 1

The delivery: 30 days to product your goods after you confirm the draft of colored packing box and we get your 20% prepayment(USD 7056.96).

10 days before we delivery,we will quote you the freight cost. Please pay us the freight cost 7 days before the delivery so that we can arrange the booking and clearance of the goods.

Please pay us the rest amount （USD16466.24）after seeing the fax copy of B/L in 3

其实表达给老外看，他能理解就行，希望能帮到你。

Answer 2

In you confirm color box design draft, and we received 20% advance (USD 7056.96), to calculate delivery date (30 days).
In our before 10 working days before the shipment, we will set the price of sea freight quote you, and before the shipment in 7 working days prior to please pay the ocean freight, we good for customs clearance arrangement booking. The remaining payment USD16466.24) yuan, see (bill of lading a faxed copy 3 days to pay us.

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在你们确认彩色包装盒设计稿，以及我们收到20%预付款（USD 7056.96）后，才开始算交货期（30天）。
在我们发货前10个工作日之前，我们会把海运费的价格报给你，并在发货前7个工作日之前请付清海运费，我们再送货到宁波港口。余下货款（USD16466.24），见提单传真件在3个工作日内付给我们。

追答

译:In you confirm color box design draft, and we received 20% advance (USD 7056.96), to calculate delivery date (30 days).
In our before 10 working days before the shipment, we will set the price of sea freight quote you, and before the shipment in 7 working days prior to please pay the ocean freight delivery, then we ningbo port. The remaining payment USD16466.24), see the bill of lading (faxed copy in 3 days to pay us.