Question

求英文自我介绍，质量好一点的，研究生复试用，本科数学系，报考国际贸易

Answer 1

Good afternoon,my dear professors:
I'm glad to be here for your interview.First of all,I'd like to introduce myself to you.(套话)
My name is BY,and I will finish my undergraduate education in ** Medical College this June.
My hometown is MAS,a beautiful city in AH province.It is famous as the industry of steel.But the environment is well.People often says it'sa flawer of Changjiang River.(介绍自己及自己的背景，重点突出，简洁明了)
Everyone have a dream,and even when I was a young girl,my dream is to be a doctor,relief people from misery and turn to the healthy life.
Five years' college education give me a lot of things to learn,a lot of chances to try,ando lot of practices to inprove myself.(我个人认为这个排比句很好，但是不要说得像在背书)It teaches me not only what to study and how to think,but also to see the importance of practical ability.
I plan to focus my research in cariology and endodontics(龋病和牙髓病).And I hope I can have a systematic view of it and making a solid foundation for future profession after three years study here.
Besides above,I also have many interests in my spare time.I like swimming and playing piano.
Generally speaking,I am a hard working student especially do the things I love.I will try my best to finish it no matter how difficult it is.(介绍自己的优点，想怎么夸怎么夸)
OK,thank you for giving me the chance.I hope to see you again and soon.(结束语)