Question

英语改错，能帮帮忙吗？

My grangdfather starts teaching me how to fly a 1._____
kite when I was a smaller boy. When he was young, 2._____
he learned how to fly kite. He also learned how to 3._____
make them! Once Grandfather made me a kite that 4._____
could make sound as it flew through the air! None 5._____
of my friends had never seen a kite like that before! 6._____
Grandfather says that if you go to a high place but 7._____
fly a kite, the kite will free you from my troubles. 8._____
The kite will carry away whatever is bothered you 9._____
far into the sky! I think I might just try on that! 10._____

(改了然后帮忙分析一下哦，我想知道原因。谢谢啦！)

Answer 1

starts——started （过去时间）
smaller——small （无比较成分）
fly 和kite 中加a 或把kite 改成kites （kites表集体）
that——which
as ——when
never——ever
but——and
my——your
9不晓得。可以打一个勾么？
on 和that 打个调。

Answer 2

starts ---> started
smaller--> little
fly kite--->fly a kite

flew--->was flying

says--->said
free you from my troubles---->free you from your troubles或者free me from my troubles
whatever is bothered you---> whatever bothers you
might--->can

其他没看出来

Answer 3

starts——started （过去时间）
smaller——small （无比较成分）
fly 和kite 中加a 或把kite 改成kites （kites表集体）
that——which
as ——when
never——ever
but——and
my——your

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