Question

作文总是觉得不得法，每次都是硬的头皮在写，最要命的是写完自己也无从知道对否，希望能帮我批改下。

四级作文
On Students' Selecting Lecturers

最少120字
1. 有些大学允许大学生自由选择某些课程的任课教师
2. 学生选择教师时所考虑的只要因素
3. 学生自选任课教师的益处和可能产生的问题

I think that a great lecturer could effect our all life, espicially is undergraduate. I is now know the students realize the lecturers selecting become more and more important. However, some of the university permission students to free select lecturers who the teacher teach some courses now.
Although, student hove to considerate to select. Three main factors have caused students' selecting. First of all, the lecturers of specialty level. Because this is most important thing at students' selecting. Second, It came from the lecturers' experience and insight. They think the teacher's esperience is precious treature. Finally, may be the levturers' figure. A good figure can be adominant position.
in the way, students can be trained self decision and indenpendent capable. Nevertheless, there are some problems for it. The unmber of stduents is very large. And they have strong poinions about this. so the result is controversial and confusion. the education quality also is effected.
Though, the problems still exist, students are cheerful and confidence at the new reform.

Answer 1

表达错误：all our life 而不是our all life ，espicially拼写错误，正确的为especially，此句表达应该为especially when we graduate from the college.It‘s obvious that the selecting of the lecturers became more and more important.后面的错误也很多，建议你先读几篇范文，看看语法结构，这个不是一天两天能提高的。刚开始要求不要太高，能写通顺就可以，还有单词要准确不要拼写错了。
注意时态、大小写等，如最后一段每句的开头都要大写。
呵呵，楼主加油，我不是来求分的，看到了写两句。。。。分对我没什么用啊。。还有词性，名词不能当形容词用，如最后一段第一句的capable 应该用名词形式capability、ability、capacity都可以。