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跪求一篇英语作文！一定要原创！！今天晚上前给偶!!!题目要求如下!!!!当然越快越好、明天上午要交。好的加

近几年，网上购物在我国迅速发展，网上购物给我们生活带来便利的同时，也有一定的弊端，请根据下表的提示，写一篇短文谈网上购物利弊。表的内容是【利：方便、省时；品种多、选择范围广；价格便宜】【弊：不能检查质量；不满意时更换麻烦；容易上当受骗】参考词汇：online shopping . convenient . exchange.
还有开头的。是Nowdays,online shopping is becoming more and more popular in our daily life .Just as every coin has two sides,online shopping has it'sown advantages and disadvantages...什么什么的了。嘿嘿。开头就很有文采撒！麻烦了！！！

Answer 1

Nowdays,online shopping is becoming more and more popular in our daily life. Just as every coin has two sides, online shopping has it's own advantages and disadvantages.

For one thing, online shopping is very convenient for our modern citizens. As we are now living in an era that efficiency is highly demanded, we do not like wasting time wandering among shops for what we need. Therefore online shopping makes our shopping much easier. There is a great range of products online for our choice, in most cases the types and scales of the commodities are many more than those in shops. Moreover, because of the low cost of opening a shop online, the prices of the commodities are often relatively cheaper than those in the real shops.

For another, online shopping takes risk. First, one may be cheated by online shops. Among all those honesty and trustworthying shops, there are some cheaters who do not sell out products, instead, once they get the money from customers they will disappear forever. Second, customers cannot assure the quality of the commodities when buying them. Only by seeing pictures of the products is not enough. Last, if there is a qulity problem, customers cannot ask for another good piece of products easily. And the courier charges will be beared by customers, therefore, some gave up exchanging the commodities then.

As i have stated above, there are advantages and disadvantages for online shopping. Everyday should think twice before buying products online.

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原创么？怕和我们老师的答案一样了。。。。

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当然是原创！你要相信我，我是英语专业毕业的。

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写的真不错。。。好的我都不知道怎抄了。。。。

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我这篇还好吧，你抄正好，也不是特别难的。你喜欢就快点采纳吧。

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好、我才采纳。

Answer 2

Money is indeed important, but money cannot buy everything. A miser may think that “money talks,” but if you only give your attention to making money, you may lose many things, such as health, friendship and love. I don't think we should regard money as everything. Money is just a tool that can help us solve problems or enable us to live a comfortable life. What we should do is to use it appropriately and not become misers. This way, all of us can lead a happier lives.

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你当我什么都看不懂撒、速度挺快、但是。。。。跟我的题目一点都不沾边！

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1 Many professors in China think that translation is the last thing people should do when communication
happens. I agree with that. But most times translation seems to be the very first and the only way to communicate. For example, someday you enter to The Royal Cakes, you cannot say "I want some fruit cakes." You should tell them "wo xiang yao dian shui guo dan gao."

2 Yes，for example, "long time no see" and "have not seen you for a long time" are both alright in English. Chinese people prefer the former one because its form/pattern looks like Hanyu "hen jiu bu jian". The latter one is also acceptable but "mei you jian guo ni hen jiu" feels weird. Like you say "niu" or "niu bi" in Chinese, Chinese people will know what you mean. But how to translate it to foreigners? Cattle? No. Super? Kinda. Newbie? Just for fun. When people are talking in their native language, they can neglect the existing of the linguistic form and just pay attention to the meaning/sense that transmitted by word or voice. How could we do the same thing with different languaes?
3 I think translation refer to the process in your head rather than what you're talking about.

It's best to just knów what your going to say in English, instead of thinking about it in Chinese and then translating it in your head, before you say it in English. That's when most errors occur.参考资料：http://www.daxueyingyu.com/forumdxyy/index.php?topic=1952.0

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拜托、我要原创、很简单的。你使劲扯也没用、我能看懂的、也知道谁写的好。

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滚！！！！！！！！！！！！！麻烦

Answer 3

Nowdays,online shopping is becoming more and more popular in our daily life .Just as every coin has two sides,online shopping has it'sown advantages and disadvantages.
Its advantage is: convenient, time saving; Many varieties, choose range; Cheaper prices.
Disadvantages:
it cannot check quality; Not content change trouble; Easily deceived.

Answer 4

Nowdays,online shopping is becoming more and more popular in our daily life .Just as every coin has two sides,online shopping has its own advantages and disadvantages.
On one hand ,when shopping online ,we can experience a tremendously high level of convenience and time-saving’s comfort.Moreover,shops online can provide us with a vast and bewildering number of goods whose prices are all cheap beyond our imagination.Consequently ，we can make our choices more efficiently and regret-freely than ever before！
On the other hand ,the demerits are also pronounced.For instance， we may not make sure whether the qualities of the goods coincide with that they are declared before we ultimately receive them.Besides ,it would be troublesome once we decide to claim an exchange when we are dissatisfied.Worse still , more often than not , most of us ,especially those newhands ,are likely to be cheated,for its non-transparency in some degree.
Altogether ，we should not be more cautious when shopping online！

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原创么？怕和我们老师的答案一样了。。。。

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是的，我觉得很奇怪，为什么那么多人怀疑我。是不是写得像老师嫌疑就大？？？我无法想象出这样的逻辑……呵呵，原来水平高也会遭人怀疑。我的天！我大学英语老师对我英语作文的评价是：
刀剑封魔录127的作文没有语法错误，有很多高级词汇，可以作为范文，大家可以拿去看看。我的自豪！！不是作假!

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你的没问题啊、可是写的太好了、好的人家都不敢抄、好不好。我高中生嘛。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。。哎呀。

Answer 5

Nowdays,online shopping is becoming more and more popular in our daily life .However ,as we all know , every coin has two sides.Online shopping has it'sown advantages and disadvantages.

First and foremost , I think there are many merits for online shopping . To begin with , compared with shopping in stroes , shoopping online is much more convenient so that we can save time .Imagine that , we just have to turn on the computer , and click on the item that you like , and then pay for the web bank , we will receive a satisfying goods comfortablly . We have no need to walk to check the goods . So we can say , online shopping is effect and efficient . Besides , when shopping online , we can buy various goods from all over the world .Unlike the shops that just have one kind of goods to sell , online shopping break the limitation of branks , or even , countries . And another advantage is that , prices are much lower than shopping in stores . We all agree the fact the people who sell goods online have no need to pay the rent for their shops , as a result , they will surely cut down the price of goods to attract the consumers.

Of course , dismerits of online shopping also exert influences to consumers .First of all , we cannot check the quality of goods while we conduct online shopping . In addition , goods are not easy to exchange if the consumers do not satisfy the goods . It's my experience that prove this point . I used to buy a clock online , but after I signed the receipt , I found the clock was't the one I want , while contacting the seller , she refused to exchanged the clock for me for the reason that I had signed the receipt . Last but not least , shopping online are apt to be deceived . We have no chance to check the good and keep track of the goods , so sometimes we will be tricked if the seller are not honest .

All of these being said , I think online shopping benifit us to some extent , but it is preious that to shop online . We must choose the goods online very carefully in so as to avoid being deceived .

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原创么？怕和我们老师的答案一样了。。。。

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是的，我刚刚写好，我保证是我写的。
但是希望您以后要努力尝试自己写，因为考试就没有人可以帮您写了。您要加油啊！

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谢谢、好的。我会背的。谢谢