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（一）MyfriendLucygavemeaticketforanexcitedfilmwhichiwanttoseeitverymuch.However,Iwillha...
（一）My friend Lucy gave me a ticket for an excited film which i want to see it very much.However,I will have to take an examination tomorrow.Ibelieve that only when you do that you should do can you make progresses in life.In my opinion,it is waste of time going to see that film right now.That's why i decided to give up seeing the film with him and working hard at my lessons.Lucy felt this a great pity that i could't see the film with her.To make her happily,I said,"why not going to see the film the day after tomorrow instead of today?"
（二）Yesterday I met a foreigner from Canada in the street.At first, I think he was just riding a bike for funs like other tourists in our city.However,I soon learned tow years later he had left his job but began his world bicycle tour.The foreigner,in his opinion the best way to see the world is by bicycle,saying he planned to spend two months touring China."China,"he said,"is a country with long history.All the prople I've met there are friendly."I showed him around the city whole afternoon.Though tiring,I was very happy to have such a good chance to practise my speaking English. 展开
（二）Yesterday I met a foreigner from Canada in the street.At first, I think he was just riding a bike for funs like other tourists in our city.However,I soon learned tow years later he had left his job but began his world bicycle tour.The foreigner,in his opinion the best way to see the world is by bicycle,saying he planned to spend two months touring China."China,"he said,"is a country with long history.All the prople I've met there are friendly."I showed him around the city whole afternoon.Though tiring,I was very happy to have such a good chance to practise my speaking English. 展开
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（一）My friend Lucy gave me a ticket for an exciting film which I want to see very much. However, I will take an examination tomorrow. I believe that only when you do what you should do can you make progress in life. In my opinion, it is a waste of time to go to see that film right now. That's why I decided to give up going to see the film with her and work hard at my lessons. Lucy felt it is a great pity that I couldn’t go to see the film with her. To make her happy, I said, "why not go to see the film the day after tomorrow instead of today?"
（二）Yesterday I met a foreigner from Canada in the street. At first, I thought he was just riding on a bike for funs like other tourists in our city. However, I soon learned that two years ago he had left his job and began his world bicycle tour. The foreigner, in whose opinion the best way to look at the world is by bicycle, said that he planned spending two months to tour in China. "China, "he said," is a country with long history. All the people I've met here are friendly”. I showed for him around the city the whole afternoon. Though tired, I am very happy having such a good chance to practice my Speaking-English.
（二）Yesterday I met a foreigner from Canada in the street. At first, I thought he was just riding on a bike for funs like other tourists in our city. However, I soon learned that two years ago he had left his job and began his world bicycle tour. The foreigner, in whose opinion the best way to look at the world is by bicycle, said that he planned spending two months to tour in China. "China, "he said," is a country with long history. All the people I've met here are friendly”. I showed for him around the city the whole afternoon. Though tired, I am very happy having such a good chance to practice my Speaking-English.
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（一）My friend Lucy give me a ticket for an excitng film which I want to see it 删very much.However,I will have to take an examination tomorrow.I believe that only when you do that you should do you can make progress in life.In my opinion,it is waste of time going删 to see that film right now.That's why i decide to give up seeing the film with him and working hard at my lessons.Lucy fells it a great pity that I could't see the film with her.To make her happy,I say,"why not going to see the film the day after tomorrow instead of today?"
（二）Yesterday I met a foreigner from Canada in the street.At first, I thought he was just riding a bike for fun like other tourists in our city.However,I soon learned tow years later he had left his job but began his world bicycle tour.The foreigner,in his opinion the best way to see the world is by bicycle. He said he planned to spend two months touring China."China,"he said,"is a country has long history.All the people I've met there删 are friendly.I showed him around the city whole afternoon.Though tiring,I was very happy to have such a good chance to practise my speaking English.
帮你全部改了一遍，因为改后的注释颜色看不到，你自己认真对照一下！
（二）Yesterday I met a foreigner from Canada in the street.At first, I thought he was just riding a bike for fun like other tourists in our city.However,I soon learned tow years later he had left his job but began his world bicycle tour.The foreigner,in his opinion the best way to see the world is by bicycle. He said he planned to spend two months touring China."China,"he said,"is a country has long history.All the people I've met there删 are friendly.I showed him around the city whole afternoon.Though tiring,I was very happy to have such a good chance to practise my speaking English.
帮你全部改了一遍，因为改后的注释颜色看不到，你自己认真对照一下！
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1will have to take an examination -->will take an examination
2only when you do that you should do can you make progresses in life--> only when you do something you should can make progresses in your life
3it is waste of time --it is a waste of time
4working hard at my lessons -->to work hard at my lessons
5Lucy felt this --Lucy felt this is
二
riding a bike -->riding bike
I soon learned tow years later -->I soon learned that for tow years
left his job but -->left his job and
to see the world is by bicycle-->to see the world is through bicycle
I've met there --> I've met here
Though tiring-->although it's tiring
very happy to have -->very happy to get
1will have to take an examination -->will take an examination
2only when you do that you should do can you make progresses in life--> only when you do something you should can make progresses in your life
3it is waste of time --it is a waste of time
4working hard at my lessons -->to work hard at my lessons
5Lucy felt this --Lucy felt this is
二
riding a bike -->riding bike
I soon learned tow years later -->I soon learned that for tow years
left his job but -->left his job and
to see the world is by bicycle-->to see the world is through bicycle
I've met there --> I've met here
Though tiring-->although it's tiring
very happy to have -->very happy to get
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