Question

帮写一篇英语作文，水平不用很高，要真实。

内容：假如你是不满16岁的李小飞的堂兄。去年，小飞外出去深圳打工。父亲和小飞的老师们都尽力劝他回学校学习，但无济于事。最近你和他通话了。在电话里你了解到他很后悔离开了学校。你很理解他现在的出境并劝他不要灰心，只要他现在想回学校还不太晚。
请根据内容写一篇120—150词的作文，并谈谈你对青少年外出打工的看法。

Answer 1

My dear Xiao Fei:
I am your brother,ZhangShan.When I hear the news that you have give up your study and taken a joh at a random in ShenZhen,I’m really startled ！Although your father and teachers have made massive efforts jointly to persuade you out of your wrong decision and persure your study again， all their struggles ultimately come in vain！
Recently ，I have phoned to you and from our conversations ，I learn that you are now exceedingly regret dropping out of school halfway,which,I think ,can be a tremendously delightful news for your parents and teachers,of course ,me inclusively.I’m sure that as long as you want to come back to your school ,you can surely make if,for the old saying goes-----it’s never too late to mend!
In my opinion ,it is radically unreasonable for those school students to join the job-hunter army.In the long run ,it shall be detrimental for them.
All in all ,if you come back to your school ,I would not agree more !
Yours Zhangsan
2011-4-5

Answer 2

作文要自己写

Answer 3

给我留个邮箱 我帮你写 分要给我就行

追问

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追答

小飞的英文名 叫什么？ xiao Fei or Fei

下面那个 你要觉得满意 我就不写了
不过下面写的好多语法错误啊........

Answer 4

My dear Xiao Fei:
I am your brother,ZhangShan.When I hear the news that you have give up your study and taken a joh at a random in ShenZhen,I’m really startled ！Although your father and teachers have made massive efforts jointly to persuade you out of your wrong decision and persure your study again， all their struggles ultimately come in vain！
Recently ，I have phoned to you and from our conversations ，I learn that you are now exceedingly regret dropping out of school halfway,which,I think ,can be a tremendously delightful news for your parents and teachers,of course ,me inclusively.I’m sure that as long as you want to come back to your school ,you can surely make if,for the old saying goes-----it’s never too late to mend!
In my opinion ,it is radically unreasonable for those school students to join the job-hunter army.In the long run ,it shall be detrimental for them.
All in all ,if you come back to your school ,I would not agree more !
Yours Zhangsan
2011-4-5