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LiuKaiisagoodstudentandalwaysreadyforhelpothers.Onedayonhiswaytoschool,hesawlittlegir...
Liu Kai is a good student and always ready for help others.One day on his way to school,he saw little girl crossed the road.A car was coming towards him quickly and the girl was very frightened to move.The car nearly hit her.Just now Liu Kai rushed up to her and caught her on the arm.The little girl was saved.She told him where she lived in,and he took her home. When Liu Kai hurried into hte classroom,the teacher has already begun his lesson.He told the teacher why he was late .He was the praised for which he had done.
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Liu Kai is a good student and always ready (to) help others. One day on his way to school, he saw (加入a) little girl (crossing) the road. A car was coming towards (her) quickly and the girl was (too) frightened to move.The car nearly hit her. Just (then) Liu Kai rushed up to her and caught her (by) the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived (去掉in), and he took her home. When Liu Kai hurried into the classroom, the teacher (had) already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for (what) he had done.
Liu Kai is a good student and always ready (to) help others. One day on his way to school, he saw (加入a) little girl (crossing) the road. A car was coming towards (her) quickly and the girl was (too) frightened to move.The car nearly hit her. Just (then) Liu Kai rushed up to her and caught her (by) the arm. The little girl was saved. She told him where she lived (去掉in), and he took her home. When Liu Kai hurried into the classroom, the teacher (had) already begun his lesson. He told the teacher why he was late. He was then praised for (what) he had done.
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1、ready for help others for用to ，意为“去” 。
2、he saw little girl 缺冠词，a little girl
3、the teacher has already begun his lesson has 用had过去式
4、A car was coming towards him根据语境 应用her
5、where she lived in,改为which she lived in
6、He was the praised for which he had done.去掉the
7、,he saw little girl crossed the road.，crossed变成crossing（全过程）
8、 the girl was very frightened to move，very变成too（语境上更好
9、for which he had done 其中 which 用what
找不出来了，尽力了
2、he saw little girl 缺冠词，a little girl
3、the teacher has already begun his lesson has 用had过去式
4、A car was coming towards him根据语境 应用her
5、where she lived in,改为which she lived in
6、He was the praised for which he had done.去掉the
7、,he saw little girl crossed the road.，crossed变成crossing（全过程）
8、 the girl was very frightened to move，very变成too（语境上更好
9、for which he had done 其中 which 用what
找不出来了，尽力了
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Liu Kai is a good student who is always ready for helping others . One day on his way to school ,he saw a little girl cross the road . A car was coming towards her quickly and the girl was too frighthend to move . The car nearly hit her .Just now Liu Kai rushed up to her and caught her on the arm.The little girl was saved.She told him where she lived ,and he took her home. When Liu Kai hurried into the classroom,the teacher had already begun his lesson.He told the teacher why he was late .He was praised for which he had done.
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a little girl crossing towards her too frightened Just then by the arm
where she lived had already begun was praised for what he had done
where she lived had already begun was praised for what he had done
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