Question

英语短文改错（急）

One day,I was in a really bad mood. I decided that drive to the shopping centre would clear my head. The car park was busy when I arrived, but I had to park in a far corner.

From this spot, I could see two women and a man crossing the road towards a clinic. The clinic was closed but I could now clear see the man's injury. Blood were flowing all over his foot.

Get the bandages I have in the glove box, I went over to the group and offered my help. One of the women used the bandages to stop from the blood flow and they made her way back to her car. My own fartunes had suddenly change too—I felt terrlfic.

I am greatfully to have been able to show some kindness. 那里有错误

Answer 1

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One day, I was in a really bad mood. I decided that (driving) to the shopping centre would clear my head. The car park was busy when I arrived, (so) I had to park in a far corner.
From this spot, I could see two women and a man crossing the road towards a clinic. The clinic was closed but I could now (clearly) see the man's injury. Blood (was) flowing all over his foot.
(Getting) the bandages I (had) in the glove box, I went over to the group and offered my help. One of the women used the bandages to stop (去掉from) the blood flow and they made (their) way back to her car. My own fortunes had suddenly (changed) too—I felt terrlfic.
I am (grateful) to have been able to show some kindness.

1. drving to the shopping center宾语从句的主语，不过改成to drive to the shopping center也可以；
2. 前后句之间明显构成因果关系（so），而不是转折关系（but）；
3. 副词clearly修饰动词see，形容词clear不可；
4. blood“血液”为不可数名词，谓语动词用单数was；
5. get the bandages为状语，且句子主语I与get构成主动关系，所以用现在分词getting；
6. 该句说明当时情况，所以用一般过去时（had）；
7. stop为及物动词，而the blood flow为其宾语，两者之间无须介词from；
8. 短语make one's way to...中的one's必须和主语they一致，所以用their；
9. 过去完成时结构“had + 过去分词”，所以用had；
10. 形容词grateful（不是greatful）做表语，但副词gratefully不可。

Answer 2

. I decided that drive to the shopping centre would clear my head. 中that改为to.
shopping centre 后应加which.
The car park was busy when I arrived 中arrived后应加in.
. The clinic was closed but I could now clear see the man's injury 中clear应改为clearly;but
改and.
Get the bandages I have in the glove box. 中Get改为go
they made her way back to her car 中they改为it.
My own fartunes had suddenly change too 中 change 改为been changed.
I am greatfully to have been able to show some kindness 中greatfully 改为greatful.

Answer 3

One day,I was in a really bad mood. I decided that drive （driving)to the shopping centre would clear my head. The car park was busy when I arrived, but(so) I had to park in a far corner

From this spot, I could see two women and a man crossing the road towards a clinic. The clinic was closed but I could now clear (clearly)see the man's injury. Blood were(was) flowing all over his foot.

Get (Getting)the bandages I have in the glove box, I went over to the group and offered my help. One of the women used the bandages to stop from the blood flow (stop the blood from flowing) and they made her(his) way back to her car. My own fartunes had suddenly change (changed)too—I felt terrlfic.

I am greatfully(greatful) to have been able to show some kindness.

Answer 4

One day,I was in a really bad mood. I decided that （to)drive to the shopping centre would clear my head. The car park was busy when I arrived, but(so)I had to park in a far corner.

From this spot, I could see two women and a man crossing the road towards a clinic. The clinic was closed but I could now clear (clearly)see the man's injury. Blood were(was) flowing all over his foot.

Get(getting) the bandages I have in the glove box, I went over to the group and offered my help. One of the women used the bandages to stop from the blood flow (fiowing)and they made her (his)way back to her car. My own fartunes had suddenly change (changed)too—I felt terrlfic.

I am greatfully(greatful) to have been able to show some kindness.

Answer 5

. I decided that（to） drive to the shopping centre （to）clear my head。其他都一样