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麻烦高手帮忙翻译一段话！

我论文的摘要，谢谢高手帮我翻译下，希望能比较地道，我英语不怎么好：）
2010年，苹果公司超越微软，成为IT业界市值最高的企业。2011年伊始，根据业内人士分析，苹果公司将超越埃克森美孚，成为全球最有价值的公司。2007年，iPod和iTunes的组合，让苹果播放器成为音乐播放器市场的无冕之王；2010年，iPhone 4和iPad的发布，在全球引起了抢购狂潮；2011年，iPad第二代上市一周，销量突破百万，再一次缔造了销售奇迹。在这些辉煌的数字背后，苹果公司成功的秘诀是什么？与其说是苹果公司旺盛的技术创新，不如说是苹果公司依靠它创新的商业模式，引起了一场又一场的业界革命。
本研究首先针对苹果公司自成立以来的发展历程作了一定的回望。以商业模式理论为依托，重点研究了苹果公司如何以其创新的商业模式创造“苹果奇迹”。通过苹果公司与其竞争对手的横向比较，对苹果公司今后的发展与面临的挑战作出展望。最后得出结论并提出适当建议，旨在为中国仍处于发展中的企业一点思考与启发。

Answer 1

2010, apple beyond Microsoft, become the IT industry's most valuable enterprise. At the beginning of 2011, according to insiders, apple will eclipse exxon mobil as the world's most valuable company. In 2007, iPod and iTunes, let apple player combination of music player market become nonetheless; 2010, iPhone 4 and iPad distribution, caused a frenzy in the global rush; 2011, the second generation iPad sales listed a week, once again break million created the sale miracle. Among the brilliant figures behind, apple's the secret of success is what? Is not so much to apple exuberant technology innovation, than say apple on its innovative business model, it caused a revolution in yet another of the industry.
This research firstly apple since the company was founded in the course of development of had some look through it. Relying on with business model theory, focus on the apple how to its innovative business models to create "apple miracle". Through the apple with its competitors on the transverse comparison, apple's development in the future and challenge prospected. Conclusion and puts forward proper Suggestions, which is still in development for Chinese enterprises in a little thinking and inspiration.

Answer 2

下面的英文是翻译器范的 句子基本都有错误 笑死人了

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的确是……好多语法错误！！！