Question

请教一篇英语改错，一共10处

Last weekend ,we decided go to a big pop festival because there are some real good bands playing. We set off early in Friday evening,taking the bus to the festival site. That we didn't expect was a huge traffic jam. We sat in the bus for ages,but by the time we got off,it was starting to get dark. We had to walk the last couples of mile. Then it began raining. Because of the queues at the entrance,it took us for a while to get in and we had to find somewhere to putting up our tent in a muddy field with hundreds of other campers.At last we put their things inside,only to discover and everything was already wet.

Answer 1

(1)we decided go to 改为 we decided to go to
（2） there are some real good 改为 there were some real good （注意时态）
（3）That we didn't expect was a huge traffic jam. 改为 What we hadn't expected was a huge traffic jam.
（4）We sat in the bus for ages,but by the time we got off,（既然坐车坐了很久，下车时天快黑也比较正常，所以用but逻辑上不好，用 so 或 and 吧）
（5）We had to walk the last couples of mile 改为 We had to walk for the last couples of miles
(6)it took us for a while to get in 改为 it took us a while to get in
（7）Then it began raining.这句话语法没问题，但一般都会说Then it began to rain
（8） putting up our tent 改为 put up our tents（不知道你们是不是共用一个帐篷，我当不是~~~）
（9）At last we put their things inside 改为 At last we put our things inside
（10）only to discover and everything was already wet. 改为 only to discover that everything was already wet

不知道你要找的是不是这10个~~~先这样子吧~~~

Answer 2

1. decided (to) go to a big...
2. because there WERE....过去时
3. We set off early in Friday evening AND TOOK the bus....
4. WHAT we didn't expect...不是that
5. We sat in the bus for ages,but by the time we got off,it STARTED to get dark.
6. We had to walk the last COUPLE of MILES.....s加在mile后面
7. it took us for AWHILE....a和while是一起
8. to find somewhere to PUT up our tent...不是putting
9. At last 后面加逗号
10. only to discover THAT....不是and

Answer 3

Last weekend, we decided go to a big pop festival because there are(1 were) some real good bands playing. We set off early in Friday evening, taking (2 and took) the bus to the festival site. That(3 what) we didn't expect was a huge traffic jam. We sat in(4 on) the bus for ages(5 age), but(5 and) by the time we got off, it was starting(6 had started) to get dark. We had to walk the last couples of mile(7 miles).Then it began raining. Because of the queues at the entrance, it took us for a while to get in and we had to find somewhere to putting(8 put) up our tent in a muddy field with hundreds of other campers. At last we put their(9 our) things inside, only to discover and(10 that) everything was already wet.

Answer 4

decided go to --decided to go to
there are -- there were
That we didn't expect --What we didn't expect
but by the time -- and/so by the time
was starting to --had started to by the time 主句用完成时态
mile--miles
for a while -- a while
to putting up -- to put up
put their things -- put our things
discover and -- discover that

Answer 5

there were some
Friday evening
What we didn't expect
on the bus
had started to get
miles
took us a while
to put up our tent
put our things inside
discover that