Question

There are four members in my family. my parents . my elder sisiter and me I graduated from Henan Un

我的家庭成员有4个,我的父母和我的姐姐
我毕业于河南中医学院，抱着对自己的人生负责人的态度我选择考研
现在我正在为进入兰州理工大学而努力
考研生活是痛苦的，但是我相信只要努力量变终究能达到质变
所以在复习的时候，我非常的认真
我觉得不论做什么，认真非常重要
只要做了就要用尽全力
不能半途而费
现在我站在这里就是对我努力的一种肯定
好了，就先说到这里吧，非常感谢。

大侠们，我想知道我的汉译英对不对
请大家指教。
很重要，请慎重回答。。
here are four members in my family.
my parents . my elder sisiter and me
I graduated from Henan University of traditional Chinese medicine.
Holding a responsible attitude for my own life, I decided to take a postgraduate entrance exam.
and now,i am trying my best for obtaining a key to Lanzhou University of Technology
Preparing for the postgraduate exam is extremely difficult.
But, I believe that my efforts will surely achieve the result from quantitative change to qualitative change.
For this reason, I was greatly serious when I reviewed the lessons.
I think, no matter what to do, it is important that we take it seriously.
As long as we do， we should make every effort, and never give up halfway.
Now I am standing here, this is exactly an affirmation of my efforts.
ok, that is all,thank you for your attention

Answer 1

1attitude for 应改为 attitude to对...的态度
2.take a postgraduate entrance exam 应改为 take the
3.注意大小写 I
4.try one's best to obtain不是for
5.但是我相信只要努力.....质变 这句翻译是太典型的中式英语. 个人觉得I believe that my efforts will not be in vain. As a saying goes:"Constant dropping wears away a stone ."这样表达比较好.
6.倒数第三排的effort应是efforts.
总的来说,翻译的还不错.有问题可以继续讨论.
祝你成功!

Answer 2

There are four people in my family, my parents, my bother and I. My family is pretty good. I’m really happy.

My mother is very beautiful, she engaged in insurance work, my mother to work very responsible
My dad is a driver, and he drives technology is very good, often takes me to go for a ride. He likes to run, reading, playing computer.

My families are always doing what is best for me .They are always on my side.I
I love each person in my family. I love my sweet warm home.