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I Believe I Can Do It

I Believe I Can Do It
提示：记述你曾经做的一件事。这件事使你体会到只要尝试，并且不放弃努力，你就能成功。
要求：1.根据所给题目，写一篇英语短文，词数不少于60，
2.语言流畅。

Answer 1

你可以写写这篇作文的经历。你以为你写不好，你不愿意写，仔细想了这个题目，你觉得自己应该尝试去写，写了才有提高，你不放弃努力，最后你做到了....
英语不要总想着去抄，看你现在的作文题目，你应该还是英语起步吧，起步很关键。你若长期不肯自己做，最后你想认真做都会觉得很难，最后你就索性放弃了，到那时，你若想自己好，那你就会后悔的。
个人私见，仅供参考（Above is personal opinion for reference only）

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I Believe I Can Do It
The past，I think that my history will always were an inferior。Now，I think if we study hard，everything will be successful。I'm a night before the exam，look history books。History exam results for 70！I do not believe！
Now，I believe hard，everything will be achieved！Everything is possible！

追答

你自己写的？还是在线翻译的啊？错误不少，开头应该说 in the past做时间状语，will always were，will是助动词（或是情态动词），后面要用动词原形的，也就是说要用will be 而不是will were，而且后面是an inferior 是单数，不会用were的，were用在复数的过去式。“I'm a night before the exam"算什么意思。look history books要表达什么意思，而且look 是不及物动词，后面要加介词的，比如，看：look at，调查：look into 等。History exam results for 70！中result for 我不理解。I do not believe 又是什么含义？I believe hard ，hard 是形容词，不能直接跟在动词believe后的，Everything is possible！这样的呼告式，我觉得用双重否定更好，Nothing is impossible！
继续努力啊

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谢了！

Answer 2

In the past,I thought I cloudn't do the Maths well ,but when I tried to do it ,I thoght it became so easy . I just do it by myself.I got a success .That make me very excited and happy.I didn't afriad of the Maths since then.
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