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MY DESKMATE
We must be affected by someone beside us.My deskmate is such a person.His hard-working attitude impressed me deeply.
I was always complain that the time was not enough for me .However ,I changed my mind when I sat beside the boy whose family was poor.When the class was over,everyone went out to play,but I saw him doing his exersisebook. He didn't notice anyone at all! I asked him in anazement,"Why not go out to play?"He said,"After school. I will help my parents do some housework,so I must study more when others are playing." I was shocked and I don't complain about the time any more.
How hard-working my deskmate is! Because of him,I have more time to study. He told me,"Where there is a will,there is a way."

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MY DESKMATE
We must be affected by someone beside us.My deskmate is such a good person.He has a hard-working attitude,and he impresses me deeply.
I always complained that the time was not enough to me. However, I changed my mind when I sat beside the boy whose family was poor.When the class was over,everyone went out and played ,but he was doing his exersisebook. He didn't notice anyone at all! I asked him in anazement(???什么东西- -),"Why don't you go out and play?"He said,"After school. I will help my parents do some housework,so I have to study more when other guys are playing." I was shocked and I didn't complain about the time any more.
How hard-working my deskmate is! Because of him,I have more time to study now. He told me,"Where has a will,where has a way."