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题目是 Which is your favourite country for tourism ? Why? 要求时间不低于2分钟，哪个国家不限，一天内完成，礼拜三早上要读的~
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Everyone has a heaven in his heart.The place in your dream, you can let you feel rest。
That is not been before, is even more valuable.
Heaven in my heart is in the distant Europe,known as the romantic country.The France.
If you want to ask。Why France is called the romantic nation？No one can speak clearly，but they will tell you ,why don't go there by yourself.If you have been there .You will understand what you want to know.
France has many famous tourist attractions，such as the Eiffel Tower,the Notre Dame,the Louvre，the Luxembourg Palace ，the Versailles and so on.
Go to France, like a dream, more like a target，I will work hard to achieve this goal.
That's all.Thank you very much.

Answer 1

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Everyone has a heaven in his heart.The place in your dream, you can feel relaxed.
It's more meaningful because you have never been there.
Heaven in my heart is in the distant Europe,known as the romantic country.The France.
If you want to ask.Why isFrance called the romantic nation？No one can speak clearly，but they maybe tell you ,why don't go there by yourself.If you have been there .You will understand what you want to know.
France has many famous tourist attractions，such as the Eiffel Tower,the Notre Dame,the Louvre，the Luxembourg Palace ，the Versailles and so on.
Go to France, like a dream, more like a target，I will work hard to achieve this goal.
That's all.Thank you very much.

Answer 2

I like Jordan, because one of my favorite places, and that is the Dead Sea.
Everyone has their own dream in his heaven, I think the Dead Sea is my paradise.
Do you know why I like Jordan, the Dead Sea? Even the most like, because I can not swim.
Ah! My heaven, I must work, must go to where the Dead Sea, my dear!
Thank you