Question

请帮我看一下这些英语句子哪里有错误，如果有请帮改正一下，谢谢了！

Welcome to our store, there are donuts, coffee, ice cream, tea, sorbet. What do you need? 欢迎光临我们的店，这里有甜甜圈，咖啡，冰激凌，茶，雪芭。您需要什么？
AThere are dozens of flavors of donuts,What do you like the taste? 甜甜圈有十几种口味，你喜欢哪种口味？
Sorbet is made from pure fruit, free of eggs and milk, fresh taste.雪芭是由纯水果制作而成，不含鸡蛋和牛奶，味道清爽。
You also need anything else?您还需要别的什么吗？
How much you need to buy donuts?您需要买要多少甜甜圈？
Please wait a minute, to find your money 请等一会，给找给您钱
Here you eat or pack? 您在这里食用还是打包?
There are also sweet with milk and egg ice cream.这里也有含有牛奶和鸡蛋的甜冰激凌。
Welcome to come again! I wish you a happy meal!欢迎下次再来！祝您用餐愉快！

Answer 1

如果是快餐店的话，用restrant比较好 We have donuts…What do you want,please? Which kind of taste do you like,please? The sorbet is only made from fresh fruit,no egg or milk is added into it,and it has a fresh taste. Would you like any thing else? How many donuts do you want? Please wait a minute, and here is your changes. Would you like to eat here or pack? We also have sweet ice-cream with egg and milk in it. Enjoy your meal,and come again please.要礼貌的话，最好在句尾或句前加Please 希望对您有帮助

Answer 2

1.Welcome to our store！we have donuts, coffee, ice cream, tea, sorbet. What do you want? 欢迎光临我们的店，这里有甜甜圈，咖啡，冰激凌，茶，雪芭。您需要什么？
2.We have different flavors of donuts,What do you like best? 甜甜圈有十几种口味，你喜欢哪种口味？
3.Sorbet is made of fruit, free from eggs and milk, and the drink is fresh. 雪芭是由纯水果制作而成，不含鸡蛋和牛奶，味道清爽。
4.Would you like anything else?您还需要别的什么吗？
5.How many donuts do you need ?您需要买要多少甜甜圈？
6.Please wait a minute,Here is your chance.请等一会，给找给您钱
7.（would you ）eat here or pack(口语）? 您在这里食用还是打包?
8.We also have sweet ice cream with milk and egg .这里也有含有牛奶和鸡蛋的甜冰激凌。
9.wish you can come again and enjoy yourselves！欢迎下次再来！祝您用餐愉快！

（这些说法比较口语化）

Answer 3

甜甜圈有十几种口味，你喜欢哪种口味？
Our donuts has dozens of flavors, May I know which flavor do you like?
味道清爽 the taste is refreshing.
您还需要别的什么吗？Do you need anything else?
您需要买要多少甜甜圈？How many donuts do you need?
您在这里食用还是打包? Do you prefer to dine in or take away?
这里也有含有牛奶和鸡蛋的甜冰激凌。We have ice cream with milk and egg in it.
欢迎下次再来！祝您用餐愉快！Please come again! Enjoy your meal!