Question

求助这篇英语短文改错

The Students Union decided to organize a music week.It will be held on the first week of May.The activities include singing pop songs and play classical and folk music.Take your own instruments,please.A music contest will be including.The students take part in the contest will listen to one part of a song or a piece of music,and then guess that where it comes from.If you will take part in this music week,please come and sign up for it after April 20th.The place for activities will be announced later.

Answer 1

activities 是名词so最好改为“pop song singing and classical & folk music playing”
NO.3行including>>included NO.4行删that ； will >>want to
报名是在某时间之前所以after 改为before

Answer 2

第二行的play变成playing
第三行including变成included
第三行The students 和take 之间插入who
第四行that去掉
第四行will 去掉

Answer 3

按序
decided→decides
held on→held in
and play→and playing
insturments→instrument
be including→be included
take part→taking part
guess that→guess
will take→take
place for→places for

Answer 4

再加个:
第五行: after April 20th改成before April 20th