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帮忙看下我的这段翻译有没错误的地方，谢谢！

老师要检查，很严格！！所以请各位帮忙看看有没语法，用词，语句结构上的错误．感激不尽
原文：我国作为世界上最大的纺织品出口商，具备了成本、价格、产业配套设施等优势。在面临人民币升值的压力下，人民币升值对我国纺织业出口造成了许多消极影响，包括利润减少、竞争力削弱、市场份额丢失等。这种情况下，为了保持我国纺织业的持久竞争力和稳固纺织业出口的地位，本文提出适当的对策，如提升产品附加值、海外投资建厂等来减少人民币升值所带来的危害；同时，通过这些对策，让我国的纺织业除了拥有传统的出口优势外，在新的形势和条件下，拥有更符合这个时代竞争的其他优势。
翻译：China is the biggest exporter of textile in the world,possessing the advantage of costs,price,industrial supporting facilities and so on.Confronted with the appreciation of RMB, which made great negative impact to our export of textile industry,including profit shrinkage,less competitiveness and market share.Under this situation,in order to maintain our competitiveness longer and strengthen the status of textile in export,this paper recommends some measures,such as increasing the product’s value,offshore sourcing to diminish the destruction of appreciation.Besides,by these ways,not only had we owned the traditional vantage of export in textile ,but also we obtained superior methods suited for new era in diffenent circumstance.
【Key Words】appreciation; export of textlie industry; negative effect; countermeasure

Answer 1

首句为何不改成,As the biggest exporter of textile in the world,China possesses the advantage of costs,price,industrial supporting facilities and so on.\
第二句无主语了,或者说中文原文就有点问题.后半句时态也未保持一致Confronted with the appreciation of RMB, which made great negative impact to our export of textile industry,including profit shrinkage,less competitiveness and market share.------可以自行改为,Due to the appreciation of RMB,it has made great negative impact to our export of textile industry,including profit shrinkage,less competitiveness and market share.
中间算了.
末句,通过这些对策不应用by this way ,而是in this way .时态也有问题,还有冠词方面的小问题
-----可以改为Thus,not only will we own the traditional advantage of export in textile ,but also we can obtain superior methods suited for a new era in diffenent circumstance.