Question

求助翻译两句中文成英文，万分感谢！

在这半个月里我叫画商把山水画修改得更完美些，这是刚刚修改后的画。一旦忙完您的事务请尽快联系我好吗？

Answer 1

I asked the painting dealer to perfect this landscape painting during the past two weeks. This is the amended painting. Please contact me as soon as possible after you've finished your business.

一楼的掌门连时态都搞不清楚哦，应该是过去式阿，第一句明明说画已修改好

Answer 2

I will have the dealer optimize this landscape painting within two weeks. This is a amended picture. Please contact me as soon as possible after you've finished your business.

Answer 3

I am called the picture business in these half month to revise thelandscape painting more perfect, this was just revises after thepicture. Once is busy you the matter to urgently request contacts withme to be good as soon as possible?

Answer 4

I will have the dealer optimize this landscape painting within two weeks. This is a amended picture. Please contact me as soon as possible after you've finished your business.
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I am called the picture business in these half month to revise thelandscape painting more perfect, this was just revises after thepicture. Once is busy you the matter to urgently request contacts withme to be good as soon as possible?