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求助翻译：英语高手请进来 （急）

摘要:入世后,我国的零售业正经历着深刻的变革 ,日趋朝着多元化的方向发展。特别是随着我国西部的零售市场的对外开放, 一些在国际上流行的新型零售业态传入我国西部不发达地区并迅速普及和发展。贵阳市是西部地区的一个经济较落后的城市，但是他的零售市场关系到西部零售市场的前途和命运！本文就贵阳市的零售业的现状及存在的问题及我国入世后对贵阳的零售市场的影响。结合贵阳的零售、消费等环境分析，提出如何迎接挑战及相应对策。

关键词：零售 零售业 超级市场 零售业态 大型综合超市

谢谢啦！
Abstract：After enters the world, our country retail trade is experiencing the profound transformation, faces the multiplex direction to develop day by day. Specially along with the our country west retail market to foreign countries opening up, some in on the international popular new retail trade condition spreads to west our country not the developed area and the rapid popularization and the development. Gui yang is a western area economical comparatively backward city, but his retail market relates west the retail market future and the destiny! This article enters the world after the Guiyang retail trade presentsituation and the existence question and our country to Guiyang'sretail market influence. Unifies environment analysis and so on theGuiyang retail sales, expense, proposed how meets the challenge andthe corresponding countermeasure.
我用翻译网翻译的。请专业人士给我指点一下有需要改的地方吗？谢谢

Answer 1

正确答案：
Summary:After entering WTO,the retailing of our country have been transforming profoundly and making great progress in variousness day by day.Particularly, along with the external opening of the west of the retailing market,some new stylish retailing form of the international trade has been introducted to the undeveloped west with rapid development and popularizatio.Guizhou is one of the undeveloped city in the west comparatively but his retailing market connects to the fortune and future of the whole west retailing.The text writes about the actuality,the problem that is being and the influence that comes from joining WTO of the retailing of Guizhou.Also the text will suggest and analyse the way of facing challenge and corresponding methods,considering the retailing ,consumption and some other factors of Guizhou.

Critical words:retail , retailing , supermarket , retailing form , large comprehensive supermarket
（翻译网翻译的东西错漏太多，象“After enters the world”这种低级错误也很多，请楼主不要用软件和网站翻译）

Answer 2

不是专业人士不好回答

决绝日货 从我做起

Answer 3

你下载个翻译软件就解决了吗

Answer 4

After China joined the WTO, our country's retail trade is experiencing a profound reformation,developing for the multiplex direction . Especially, with the open west retail market to foreign countries , some new kind of retail trade prevalent in the international market spreads into our country's underdeveloped western area and developes rapidly . Gui yang is a city where the economy developes relatively slowly in the western area ,but its retail market relates to the future and the destiny of the west retail market!This article analyzes the present situation and some existing problems of Guiyang retail trade and the influence of our country's entering WTO ，it also proposes some polocies of how to deal with the challenge.
The key words:retail , retailing , supermarket , retailing form , large comprehensive supermarket.