Question

请大家帮忙翻译一下谢谢了：

请问租房押金问题如何，何时可以把押金退还，我已经把账号给了***，可是还是没有把钱转给我，我已经等了很久了，最近缺钱用，请尽快退回押金，谢谢

Answer 1

Please let me know the status of my rental deposit.
When will I be receiving the refund?
I have already given my bank account number to ***.
However, till date I still have yet to receive any money from him.
The refund has been in arrears for a very long time.（看注（1））
Please expedite the refund.（看注（2）, （3））
Thank you.

注：
1）英文字面的意思是“押金已拖欠了很久”。觉得这比较好因为重点是在“拖欠押金”。既然押金拖欠了很久那也是说你等了很久。 如果不喜欢就用 “Ihave been waiting for a long time.” or " I have already waited for a long time."
2）“最近缺钱用”翻译为“Recently, I am facing cash flow problem." 可是这一句话我任为不需要告诉欠款者。因为这对于追讨欠款是没有帮助的。反而应加入以下的句子”According to your contract (或 "agreement"), the rental deposit should be refunded within xx days. It has already been more than xx days."
3）”尽快”可被翻译为“As soon as possible”。可是我任为不适用在追讨欠款的情况。因为意思“以欠款者所任为的可行度而尽量加快”。如果欠款者任为“not possible“ 那就不会量加快了。 所以我用 "expedite" 。

希望有帮到你。。。

Answer 2

May I know something about renting deposit. when the deposit can be refunded. I already gave the account No. to ....,but he did not tranfer any money to me yet. I have been kept waiting for long. cause I am in short of cash recently,would you please return deposit as soon as possible, thank you.

Answer 3

If you can not give back my putmoney,
I"ll go to tell police man for help.
If I am angrry I"ll kill you ! man
I have very very little money right now and I want monet to see my girl frend.
So if you are a rightman , give back my putmoney qucelly!!Man 　

Answer 4

please advise the status of renting deposit, when you can return it back? I have already given my account number to ..., but he has not yet returned it. I have been waiting for a long time. Please return the deposit as soon as possible for I am hard for money recently. Thanks!

Answer 5

what about the rental deposit? I am short of money recently. when wil you return the rental deposit to me? though i have given my bank account to you, i haven't got the deposit. please soon.