Question

看看这英语演讲稿有没有问题！！

I love English

Good morning ,everyone.My mame is Jiaozhixin. Today I want to talk about my favorite subject---English.English is one of the most usefulest langvages in the world. I like English because it is vevy interesting.I enjoyed English when I was only seven years old.In that time,I didn't lnow English very much,but Ireally liked English songs and I could sing a lot.Now,I'm 14,English become to one of my school subjects,I like to speak English with my classmates and my English marks are very good.Practicing English has become my habit little by little.I really like English.Thanks for listening my speech!

Answer 1

Good morning, ladies and gentlemen.I am Jiaozhixin. Today I want to talk about my favorite subject---English.English is one of the most useful languages in the world. I love English because it is very interesting.I learnt the charm of it when I was only seven years old. At that time,I didn't really know much about English, but I enjoyed listening to English songs and I could sing a lot of them.Now,I'm 14, English becomes one of my school subjects. I often chat with my classmates in English and my English marks are generally good. Practising English has gradually become my habit. I will go on practising it as 'Practice make perfect'. I hope all of us can do the same together so the whole class will improve. That's all I would like to share, thank you for your attention to my speech.

没大问题，就是有拼字错误和一些用词重覆的毛病。不错哦^^都在听甚麼英文歌啊?
I learnt the charm of it=领受到英语的魅力
very good(很好)转成generally good(还不错) 谦虚一点吧...
speak English 有点中式(讲英文)，speak/talk/chat in English好一点
gradually=逐渐，很常用的词，记起来就是
'Practice make perfect'=谚语，熟能生巧
the whole class=全班(同学)

Answer 2

most usefulest =》 most useful
I didn't lnow English very much =》 I didn't know much English
,English become to one of my school subjects =》去掉to
Practicing English has become my habit little by little=> Practicing English has become a part of my life

Answer 3

I love English

Good morning ,everyone. My name is Jiaozhixin. Today I want to talk about my favorite subject---English.English is one of the most useful language in the world. I like English because it is very interesting, I started to enjoy English when I was only seven years old. In that time,I didn't know English very well,but one thing I can tell is that I really like English songs and I could sing a lot English songs. Now, I'm 14, English has become one of my school subjects,I like to speak English with my classmates and my English marks are very high. Practicing English has become a part of my life and i am very enjoying to speak English. I like English so much! Thanks for listening my speech!

Answer 4

有很多错误的拼写，应该是输入的问题。另外，把改为I didn’t know English very much改为I only know a little English.把little by little 改为gratually（逐渐地）