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尊敬的加拿大驻华大使馆签证处：
我是申请人XXX，护照号XXXXXXXX.我个人准备2011年4月28日-5月11日携家人赴美旅游，并在2011年3月已办好赴美签证和进行了机票预定。
因公司计划安排我在2011年6月4日-18日期间去加拿大进行业务培训，为了不影响赴美行程，我个人提出优先其它同事进行加拿大签证办理，并与2011年4月11日进行了申请。
但很遗憾，2011年4月22日我收到加拿大领馆拒签消息，考虑到公司安排赴加拿大的行程时间是不能更改的，因此我取消了个人赴美旅游的计划，准备再次申请办理加拿大签证，同时我增加了个人财产方面的资料，包含：房产证、车辆行驶证、结婚证、我太太的存款证明。
我申明在加拿大期间，会遵守当地的法律和法归，并保证如期归国。请接受我新的申请材料，并希望能得到批准。

Answer 1

Dear Canadian Embassy Visa Section:
I am the applicant XXX, passport number XXXXXXXX. I personally prepared to travel with my family the United States on April 28th to May 11th, 2011, and had already prepared a U.S. visa and ticket reservations in March 2011,
Because the company had arranged me to go to Canada for business training on June 4, 2011 -18th, June 2011, in order to not to affect the visit to United States, I proposed to give priority of the Canadian visa to my other colleagues, and had applied on the 11th of April, 2011.
however it’s such a pity, on April 22, 2011 I had received the news that Canadian Consulate refused to sign my VISA, taking into account that the company’s arrangement date for the trip to Canada cannot be changed, so I canceled the plan for traveling to the United States, prepares again to re-apply for Canada visa, also I increased my personal property information, including: real estate license, vehicle license, marriage certificate, proof of my wife's savings.
I affirm during my time in Canada, I will abide by the laws, and I ensure I will return on time. Please accept my new application, and I hope to get an approval.
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Answer 2

The Canadian embassy respect covering:
I am the applicant XXX, passport number XXXXXXXX. I personally prepare 2011 April 28 - May 11, and leisure travel to bring their families in March 2011 already run a U.S. visa and the ticket reservation.
Because the company plan I in 2011, June 4-18 to Canada during business training, in order to not affect travel, I proposed to other colleague personal priority, and Canadian visa requirements on April 11, 2011 the application.
But unfortunately, the 2011 April 22 I receive Canadian consulate refus news, considering the company to arrange travel time in Canada which can not be changed, so I cancel individual leisure travel to plan, prepare to apply for Canadian visa again, in the meantime I increased personal property information, including: house property card, the vehicle registration, marriage certificate, my wife's deposit certificate.
I stated in Canada, will comply with local during the legal and method, and guarantee duly returned unto. Please accept my new application materials, and hope to get approved.

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