Question

英语短文改错！急死了！

We all have a strong desire to succeed. For some the desire is great than that of the average people. In fact,everyone wants to be successful so very few are willing to pay the price of hard working. Success is an attitude and has no really secrets. It all
Master every detail of your life. Attempt to do so

Answer 1

第一行:grea t改为greater than说明要用比较级
第二行:so 改为but 两句话是转折的关系
第三行:really 改为real really是副词 不能修饰名词 secret
第四行:start 改为strats 因为主语it是单数第三人称.

Answer 2

For some the desire is great than that of the average 这里有个than可以看出是比较级，所以great改为greater

Answer 3

strong desire to success. becouse some the desire. In fact,everyone wants to be successful but very few are willing to pay the price of hard work. Success is an attitude and has no realsecrets.

Answer 4

For some the desire is greater than the average people. In fact,everyone wants to be successful but very few are willing to pay the price of hard working.