Question

求高手！英语作文！！

问题：
假如你叫王丽，是一个高中生。请你用英语给报社写一封信，反映如下情况并且谈谈你的看法。
1.现在有很多学生使用手机一是认为这是一种时髦，二是认为便于跟家人和朋友联系。
2.一些学生把手机带进教室，在课堂上经常听见手机的铃声。破坏课堂纪律。
3.有的同学还在课堂上发短信，浪费宝贵的学习时间。
4.建议：教室是学习的地方，需要安静；学生不应该在教室中使用手机；应该集中注意力学习（附：自己再写一条建议。）
要求：100词数左右。
Dear Editor,
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Yours sincerely
Wang Li
PS：其中请故意写错几处（时态语态词组任选。）

Answer 1

Dear Editor,
I'm a senior high student。 Nowadays，a large number of students use cell phones because of the reasons that not only do they think it is smart to use cell phones but also they finds（find） it convenient to keep in contact with their families and friends。Besides，some students take their cell phones into the classroom，which result（results） in the aftermath that the sound of the bell can be heard usually and it break（breaks）the discipline in the classroom. What‘s more，some students even send messages during the class ，which wastes their precious study time。Therefore，I suggest that students shouldn’t use their cell phones in the classroom because the classroom which is the place where students study needs quiet。Furthermore，students should concentrate on their study rather than their cell phones。Last but not the least，as far as I‘m concerned，the teachers need to take on the responsibility to keep discipline in her classroom.
Yours sincerely
Wang Li
PS：括号中为正解