Question

一篇高中英语作文 半小时后要好的加分！！！

设你校将成立“我爱英语”俱乐部以培养同学们学习英语的兴趣请你以学生会的名义用英语写一份海报进行宣传
报名时间 2011 5 5至8日下午3点到5点
地点 教学楼三楼会议室
组织者 校学生会
海报发出时间 2011 4 28
参考词汇 students union
100词左右

Answer 1

现写的……语法什么的应该没什么问题。但是用词方面比较普通……字数112
dear students:
as we all know, english is getting more and more important in our daily lives, so learning english would be truly a necessity, especially for us students.
as your reliable friend and teacher, the Students Union is now offerring you a great opportunity to improve your english skills. we are founding a club called "i love english" which intends to forster your interest in english.
students who want to join in this club can sign up for it from May 5th to May 8th. we will have staff waiting for you from 3 pm to 5 pm at the conference room ( at the 3rd floor in the teaching building).
thank you for your attention!
yours
Students Union
april 28th 2011

Answer 2

I Love English Club
Welcome to "I Love English Club", the aim of our club is to inspire more students to use English, communicate in English and love English. We advocate learning in happiness, in passion as well as in wisdom. Unlike traditional "English Corner", we create an atmosphere where members fell more like at abroad then at home. Members in our club are very excellent and helpful, they are always ready to help you. Come and join us to enjoy this giant feast of English.
Time for enroll: 3-5 o'clock at May 5-May 8, 2011
Place:The meeting room in the thrid floor of the teaching building
Students Union
April 28th, 2011

呃，我觉得宣传海报应该是这样的吧。