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英语短文改错Afterwatch“EnglishTV”lastSundaymorning,Iphonedtomyclassmateandtoldhimtogotoseea... 英语短文改错After watch“English TV”last Sunday morning,I phoned to my classmate and told him to go to see a film in the afternoon.Before the film was over,we returned to school to do our lessons.While we are having a rest in the corridor,I saw Mr Liu,my head teacher.He told me that we had made some progresses in English,but my Chinese lagged behind,especially my Chinese composition.He suggested I must read more and keeping a diary every day.In the evening my father told me that reading newspapers would do me well for improving composition writing.That was really good idea!What they said was quite right, and I should follow their advice.十处错误,急! 展开
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第一行watch改为watching 去掉phoned后面的 to三we are 中的are改为were;I saw 中的I改为we四progresses 改为progress五must改为should或者去掉keeping--keep;for --in;good idea--a good idea;their--his
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1.watch→watching
2.phoned to→phoned
3.Before→After
4.are having→were having
5.we had→I had
6.progresses→progress
7.must→should
8.keeping→keep
9.me well→me good
10.good→a good

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Before为多余;
we are having应为we were having
we had made 可为we had to make
i must 应i should
that was a good idea!

供参考。
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watch--watching
phoned to --phoned
are --were
we--i
progresses--progress
must--should
keeping--keep
for --in
good idea--a good idea
their--his
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