Question

高中英语改错。

每处都有错误。
Dear Li Ming，
I was glad to meet you several days before. I 1.______
hope you can adapt
quickly to things here, and including your school, classroom, 2.______
teachers,classmates and life.You know,we don't understand 3.______
you at all so we didn't talk with you and you often slept 4.______
during classes. I was sure classmates didn't play you 5.______
as your study attitude was good. So I expect you can 6.______
correct it.And I want to give you some advices. Firstly, I suggest 7._____
you keep smile every day, which can make you keep a good 8._____
mood. Secondly,you should take with you classmates after class 9.____
and you will find friends soon.Lastly,you must study hard,that 10._____
makes all classmates accept you.I will try me best to help you.

Answer 1

1. was改正am才对，有个before就表示过去遇到了。从整篇文章可以看出这是一般现在时。
2.去掉and,不然就不对。
3. don't改为didn't
4.so后加that;
5.play with you
6.was not good
7.advices改为advice，因为advice是不可数的
8.keep改为keeping,suggest sb doing才是表示建议某人做某事。
9.take改为talk,you改为your.不知道是不是打错了，高中英语貌似没这么简单的改错。
10.that-which.
你是湖南的考生吗？貌似只有湖南高考考这道题吧、

追问

suggest sb doing 是暗示某人某事把。我突然发现 suggest那没问题。跟的虚拟语气。keep后面跟doing！
我是重庆的。。9的个可能打错了
2的个我改的including变成included！

追答

suggest sb doing就是建议某人做某事啊。一般不用suggest sb to do，语法上上错误的。
2.的你肯定错了。including me=me included（意识我包括我） 你用included,名词就得在前，懂吗？

追问

我们老师说的 suggest doing是暗示某人做某事啊。。这里应该改keep smiling
为什么去掉and呀。。感觉不对。。。

追答

关于 suggest doing的问题，你去看下这个http://iask.sina.com.cn/b/8158718.html ，你保证懂，你们老师说的不准确。keep smile才是保持微笑啊，keep smiling一般不这么说的。这道题的suggest sb.do不存在的，肯定错在这个地方。所以我刚开始的回答绝对是对的。
关于第2个的话，我又想下，things前得加the特指。
我感觉这样应该没问题了。。

追问

http://iask.sina.com.cn/b/12368267.html
(1)—The experiment has failed. —I suggest you ___D__ again.——试验失败了。 ——我建议你再试一次
A. trying B. will try C. would try D. try
这里是"suggest sb do sth"“建议某人做某事”的固定用法。suggest还有一种用法是doing sth，但是解释为“暗示某人做某事”意思不一样，这里显然不是暗示的意思
发现越来越不对！！

追答

没办法了，我只能这样回答你吧。我在网上搜了10条左右的帖子，有9条是认为suggest doing是建议某人做某事的意思。所以我还是坚持我的，呵呵，其实没事的，学习就是需要探讨吧。。以后有什么问题可以一起讨论啊。

Answer 2

1. before- ago
2. classroom 删掉
4. slept- sleep
5. play with you
6. was not good
7. advice
8. suggest you to keep
9. your classmates
10. that- which
个人感觉 希望对楼主有所帮助

Answer 3

1. before改为ago
2. classroom 删掉
3.don't改为didn't
4. so改为because
5. play with you
6. good前加not
7. advices 的s去掉
8. smile 改为smiling
9. take改为talk
10. that改为which

Answer 4

看得真难受..小学水平的作文吗

追问

你去叫个小学一年级的来写撒。。。