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Itwasquietlateatnight.Iwasreadinganewspaperinmyroomwhenihearsomeoneknockingonthedoor....
It was quiet late at night. I was reading a newspaper in my room when i hear someone knocking on the door .I opended it and saw a young man with glass standing there. He said that he was a firend of my sister and wanted to have a talk with her. I wondered that my sister had such a friend but had to let him in
AS he talked ,I found that he knew nothing my sister .Then I came to know that his words were no ture.Suddenly my sister rushed in and the young man was so surprised when he didn't knew what to do for a moment . I caught the man by the arm at once while my sister sent for a police man 展开
AS he talked ,I found that he knew nothing my sister .Then I came to know that his words were no ture.Suddenly my sister rushed in and the young man was so surprised when he didn't knew what to do for a moment . I caught the man by the arm at once while my sister sent for a police man 展开
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It was【quite】late at night. I was reading a newspaper in my room when I 【heard】 someone knocking on the door. I opended it and saw a young man with 【glasses】 standing there. He said that he was a firend of my 【sister's】 and wanted to have a talk with her. I wondered 【if/whether】 my sister had such a friend but 【I】had to let him in.
As he talked, I found that he knew nothing 【about】my sister.Then I came to know that his words were【not】true. Suddenly my sister rushed in and the young man was so surprised 【that】he didn't knew what to do for a moment. I caught the man by the arm at once while my sister sent for a policeman.
It was【quite】late at night. I was reading a newspaper in my room when I 【heard】 someone knocking on the door. I opended it and saw a young man with 【glasses】 standing there. He said that he was a firend of my 【sister's】 and wanted to have a talk with her. I wondered 【if/whether】 my sister had such a friend but 【I】had to let him in.
As he talked, I found that he knew nothing 【about】my sister.Then I came to know that his words were【not】true. Suddenly my sister rushed in and the young man was so surprised 【that】he didn't knew what to do for a moment. I caught the man by the arm at once while my sister sent for a policeman.
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a young man with glass---a young man with glasses;
a firend of my sister---a firend of my sister's;
and wanted to have a talk with her---and that he wanted to have a talk with her;
I wondered that ---I wondered whether;
but had to let him in---but I had to let him in;
he knew nothing my sister---he knew nothing about my sister;
no ture---not true(no只能接名词,不能接形容词);
when ---that (这里是个so...that...短语);
a police man---a policeman.
a firend of my sister---a firend of my sister's;
and wanted to have a talk with her---and that he wanted to have a talk with her;
I wondered that ---I wondered whether;
but had to let him in---but I had to let him in;
he knew nothing my sister---he knew nothing about my sister;
no ture---not true(no只能接名词,不能接形容词);
when ---that (这里是个so...that...短语);
a police man---a policeman.
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1.正确
2.hear改成heard(时态是一般过去时)
3.glass改成glasses(眼镜是复数)
4.sister改成sister's(所有格)
5.把that改成whether(考查wonder的用法)
6.but had to ---but I had to (but分句缺少主语,加I)
7.knew nothing my sister--knew nothing about my sister(know about的搭配)
8.no改成not
9.when改成that(so+形容词.that+从句的用法 意思是:如此...以致...)
10.sent for--sent him for
2.hear改成heard(时态是一般过去时)
3.glass改成glasses(眼镜是复数)
4.sister改成sister's(所有格)
5.把that改成whether(考查wonder的用法)
6.but had to ---but I had to (but分句缺少主语,加I)
7.knew nothing my sister--knew nothing about my sister(know about的搭配)
8.no改成not
9.when改成that(so+形容词.that+从句的用法 意思是:如此...以致...)
10.sent for--sent him for
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