请大家帮我把这篇英文改下,谢谢 20

Intheperiodofstudy,Ifoundmyselfintheprocessoflearning,therearestillmanydeficiencies,t... In the period of study, I found myself in the process of learning, there are still many deficiencies, these deficiencies make the progress I can not get better, I decided from the beginning that their lack of body start to change their efforts to allow yourself to become more outstanding.
Once, I always felt the ability of skills is good, it has been not to promote myself, when I come across people more powerful than me, when I discovered that I own has been no progress, I neglect the cultivation of individual skills, nor should be considered very carefully how to improve personal skills, which is leading one of the reasons I can not progress; and now I feel it can not be a very excellent student, though I thought to myself before feeling very good, but, again, because I not trying hard enough, I met his opponent, but I am well aware of the advantages of their own, I am a very active person thinking, but has been as lazy, so there is no strict demands on themselves. In fact, I am knowledge and skills to master and comprehend but it is still very fast, because I was not willing to take the time to learn. So I think, cause I'm the limited capacities, because I am not trying hard enough, there is no clear goal, I am not a poor student acceptance, or even say that my acceptance is good, I would like to In the future study, I should clearly know what their goals is to become a good hard-working student, I think I'll pass more thinking, more reading, ask questions, etc. to change their ways to improve themselves.
主要是写自己的不足,以及改正,有些是网络翻译的,请大家帮我修改一下,语法问题,和用词不当!!好还会加分的!!急急
谢谢大家了
作文要250个单词以上!!,谢谢,字太多,原文不能全部发上来,就按我翻译的改改吧,谢谢了
不用太复杂,但要对!!
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Always think how strong he is, but di in a period of learning, I found myself in the course of study still exist many deficiencies, these disadvantages that I cannot get better progress, I decided to find yourself from the starting point, change their insufficient, trying to let oneself become more outstanding.
Once, I always feel like a skills ability is good, so has been also didn't go to enhance their own, when I met more severe than I when the people, I find that, is my own has been no progress, I neglected for personal skills training, also not very seriously considered but should how personal skills, this is causing a reason I couldn't progress; And now I find myself also won't be a very good student, although before, I feel very good for themselves, but also because I hard enough, I met opponents, however, I for their own advantages very understanding, I was a thinking person, only is very active, so no because of laziness always strict demands on themselves. Actually, I for knowledge, skill grasping and comprehend the fact or soon, because I will not take the time to study. So I think, cause I now ability is limited, because I myself hard enough, no definite goal, I'm not a accept ability is very bad student, even, I accept ability is good, I think, in the later study, I should know, their own goals, what is to become an excellent diligent student, I think I'll read more by think much, ask etc, many ways to change themselves, improve themselves. D expect such a vulnerable or not
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Always think how strong he is, but di in a period of learning, I found myself in the course of study still exist many deficiencies, these disadvantages that I cannot get better progress, I decided to find yourself from the starting point, change their insufficient, trying to let oneself become more outstanding.
Once, I always feel like a skills ability is good, so has been also didn't go to enhance their own, when I met more severe than I when the people, I find that, is my own has been no progress, I neglected for personal skills training, also not very seriously considered but should how personal skills, this is causing a reason I couldn't progress; And now I find myself also won't be a very good student, although before, I feel very good for themselves, but also because I hard enough, I met opponents, however, I for their own advantages very understanding, I was a thinking person, only is very active, so no because of laziness always strict demands on themselves. Actually, I for knowledge, skill grasping and comprehend the fact or soon, because I will not take the time to study. So I think, cause I now ability is limited, because I myself hard enough, no definite goal, I'm not a accept ability is very bad student, even, I accept ability is good, I think, in the later study, I should know, their own goals, what is to become an excellent diligent student, I think I'll read more by think much, ask etc, many ways to change themselves, improve themselves.
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简单句太多了,多用点复杂句会好一点,文章也会增加亮点
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