Question

英语翻译下，谢谢了，好像语句有错误，帮忙修改下,谢谢了,急需

1.Not only does the phone have maps with GPS but also does it provide full web browing.
2.If you want to become a star salesperson overnight perhaps an evening spent analyze your own sales process would be an evening well spent.
3.At the beginning of the nineteenth century,working hours were from sunrise to sunset,pay was awful,and workingconditions being poor and dangerous.
4.It must rain last night as it is wet outside.
5.The purpose of traveler's check is to protect travelers from theft and accidental lost of money.

Answer 1

Not only does the phone have maps with GPS but also "does it provide=>provides" full web browsing.
这个手机不光带GPS地图，还能提供全网浏览功能。
If you want to become a star salesperson overnight perhaps an evening spent "analyze=>analyzing" your own sales process would be an evening well spent.
如果你想一夜成为明星销售人员，将一整晚用来分析自己的推销过程也许会是很充实的一夜。
At the beginning of the nineteenth century,working hours were from sunrise to sunset,pay was awful,and working conditions "being=>were" poor and dangerous.
19世纪初，上班时间是从日出到日落，薪水非常悲剧，工作环境则简陋而危险。
It must "rain=>have rained" last night as it is wet outside.
昨晚一定是下雨了，因为（现在）外面是湿的。
The purpose of traveler's check is to protect travelers from theft and accidental "lost=>loss" of money.
旅行支票的目的是防止旅者被窃或者不小心丢失现金。

这翻译量给50分也足够了，还要改错。。。下次急需记得给分哦 p.s 楼上好悲剧

Answer 2

1，Not only does the phone have maps with GPS, but also provides full web browsing（后句不倒装，同主语省略）
2. If you want to become a star sales person overnight(in one night) perhaps an evening spent analyze(on analyzing) your own sales process would be an evening well spent.
3.At the beginning of the nineteenth century,(the) working hours were(working-time was) from sunrise to sunset,pay (the payment) was awful,and (the) working conditions being(were) poor and dangerous.
4.It must rain last night as it is wet outside.(对,不必虚拟）
5.The purpose of traveler's check is to protect travelers from theft and accidental lost of money.（from being stolen and lossing money accidentally)

Answer 3

1.Not only does the phone have maps with GPS but also it provides full web browing.
2.If you want to become a star salesperson overnight perhaps an evening spent analyzing your own sales process would be an evening well spent.
3.At the beginning of the nineteenth century,working hours was from sunrise to sunset,pay was awful,and workingconditions was poor and dangerous.
4.It must have rained last night as it is wet outside.
5.The purpose of traveler's check is to protect travelers from theft and accidental losing of money