Question

一篇英语作文怎么写

大赛主题：关爱他人 More Care For Others
参赛对象：初中学生 高中学生
大赛说明：作文主题More Care for Others，旨在表现关怀他人的精神。 参赛学生可充分发挥主观能动性，根据主题自拟题目，选择自己最有基础和最善于表达的内容和形式，或叙事，或记人，或议论，鼓励大家自由发挥，力求表达自己的的真情实感。 高分求作文

Answer 1

我来帮你。（我在澳大利亚5年了，英语可以的）是关于关爱儿童的，我觉得对你的水平已经很棒了。 The Caring of Children

Do we care about children today? No, people today don’t really care about children because we get
pushed about by adults. Children are also getting abused by adults at
home.

We children go into shops on our own and we get thrown out, or
followed around the shop. The shop owners think that we are going to
steal there goods of the shelves without paying for them. The shop
owners are having to put up more security cameras and prices of there
stock because we are stealing from them. They are putting up the
security cameras to watch where and what we are doing in the shop,
they are even following us to see what we are doing if the cameras
can’t see us, and they act as they are putting up new stock on the
shelves. If we have bags on our back the shop owner will sometimes ask
you to open your bag, so they can see weather you have anything,
showing that they don’t trust us.

Surveys show that one in six children today are getting severely hurt
at home by there parents. Only some parents are admitting to hitting
there children, and who do get hurt by there parents are to afraid to
tell someone about it. Research shows that a few parents put their
children’s heads under water and held it there, others have poured hot
water over them. A few mothers admit to pinching, scratching and
biting there children. Some children’s parents make them wash there
mouths out with salt and/or soap, and if they refuse to eat there
supper they are made to eat mustard sandwiches. In recent surveys it
is showed that mothers are more likely to hit their children than
fathers are, even when the care of the child or children are shared
evenly. Half of children in a survey said it was right for there
parents to smack them and are going to hit there children when they
are adults.

Some children who have jobs are working illegally in factories. The
children who work in factories don’t get paid fairly, an example of
this is in a carrot factory in England. In this factory there is
children working from the age of ten years old to fourteen years old,
who are getting paid thirty pence [IMAGE]a crate of carrots they fill.
Some of them are getting paid nine pounds for eighteen thousand
carrots. They are working for four hours each night, starting from
three thirty in the afternoon till seven o’clock in the evening. Two
million children are getting used as slave labour each year in
Britain. In the carrot factory the workers are working in terrible
conditions, they are working in a big shed which is run by a parish
councillor, on the floor there is wet carrots that have been dropped
and when the children are walking with the crates they can’t see very
well and may slip. The machines that they work on have very sharp
blades which are slicing the carrots, this is also where the children
are putting their hands to get the carrots out. Their hands are just
millimetres away from the blades and could end in a fatal accident.
Children should only work for two hours on a school day and no later
than seven o’clock in the evening. Since that report mothers and
fathers said that they were not going to send there children back.

Parks are now being designed by architects for younger children
between the age of two to nine years old, children over that age have
no place to go so they hang around the streets. When they hang around
the streets and get into bad habits like drug tacking and smocking at
young ages. Children from the age of ten and above want to explore new
things than be locked in a cage with swings and slides. We want to be
heard and seen by adult but they just ignore us all the time. We
children want a place where we can go to where there is only a couple
of adults. The government have just spent approximately four hundred
million pounds on the new parliament buildings in Edinburgh where they
could have spent some of that on us children. This year it is all
about the play station, micro scooter and gadgets. Children are now
into technology and want to see more of it. If a child had a choice
of either whether to play in a park for an half hour or to play a play
station for an half hour the child would definitely go for the play
station.

Answer 2

爸爸我想对你说……
爸爸，我想对你说，以后少喝酒，好吗？
爸爸，您知道吗？有一次，我看见您在外面吃饭，喝醉酒了，还是几个叔叔把您抬回家放在沙发上的。您不知道，您一次又一次地从沙发上滚到地上，我和妈妈只好把沙发口移向墙，最后，您还是把沙发给挤出来，您落进沙发脚下睡了一个晚上。妈妈走过去看了看您，皱着眉头大骂起来，醉酒的您根本没有听见，像死人似的。妈妈的声音更大了，她像发怒的狮子。可是，您最终什么也没听见。我看见妈妈气得一句话也说不出了。
爸爸，您不是只有那一次喝醉酒，而是经常醉酒，我多么希望您像我们班同学的爸爸一样不再喝酒了。爸爸，您不知道您因为喝酒进了多少次医院？可是每次您从医院回来后不久，您又喝酒，醉酒，进医院……
爸爸，您知道吗？报纸上、电视上都报道喝酒会伤害身体。爸爸，如果有一天您因为喝酒失去了生命，我就再也没有爸爸了，到时我听到别人喊“爸爸”，我会想你的，但到那时，您什么也都不知道了！
爸爸，我想有个幸福的家，如果没有您，我就成了孤儿。爸爸，您要保重身体，少喝酒，行吗？

英文:

Father want to say to you ……
Father, I want to say to you, later little drink, good?
Father, do you know?Once, I see you have a meal in the outside, got drunk wine, be still that a few uncle lift you to go home to put on the sofa.You don't know that you roll ground from the sofa once and with a run, I and mother have to move a sofa toward wall, end, you still keep give°ing the sofa to extrude, you fell to sleep into the sofa foot a night.The mother walk through to took a look you, wrinkly the eyebrows lambaste, drunk with wine of you heard at all and be like dead a person.The mother's voice is larger, she be like to get mad of lion.But, you are end what also do not hear.I see a mother spirit a words also coulded not say.
Father, you isn't only the to get drunk wine at a time, but usually drunk with wine, I how hope you are like our class father of the classmate similar no longer drank.Father, you don't know you because of drink into how many hospitals?But every time you are from the hospital come back behind soon, you again drink, drunk with wine, enter hospital ……
Father, do you know?On the newspaper, television top all the report way drink meeting injury body.Father, if one day you because of drinking to lose life, I had no father any further, I hear other people shout "father" by that time, I will miss you, but till then, you what also all don't know!
Father, I want to have the house of a happiness, if have no you, I became orphan.Father, you want to take care of health, little drink, is all right?

Answer 3

自己改动一下就行了
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