Question

帮忙检查一下这篇英语作文有没有语法错误

是我同学写的，内容如下：
My hero is Helen Keller who writes lots of books.
Helen Keller was born in 1880.She was American.When she was six months old,she could say a few words.She was very smart.But when she was two years old,there was something wrong with her.She couldn't see and hear,and she even couldn't talk.With the help of her teacher Annie,she began to feel the world around her with her hands.She learnde read and write.She learned maths,natural,French and German.She was very hard.And,she wrote many positive books.In fact,her story brought new hope to many blind and deaf people.
I think she is great because she is optimistic and staunch.I like her a lot!
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Answer 1

我晕倒了，楼上为什么连一些拼错了的单词都没有看出来呢？还照着copy下来...
1、英文字典里面没有unforgettable这个词。用memorial更加合适
2、died是“死了”，是没有错，但是在这里用were killed更恰当，表示“被地震所杀”
3、get together要改成got together，因为那里都是过去时，突然用get不合适
4、save more people也不对，没有人会这样说，想要表达“尽量多的人”应该说成save people as many as possible
5、give up还是要改成gave up
6、rebuid拼写错误，应该是rebuild；peole也是拼写错了，应该是people
7、最后一句不符合英文的习语，英文里面都是说的tomorrow will be another day，而不是better
是否可以解决您的问题？