Question

请英语好的朋友帮助纠正一下翻译错误：“最近在我上发生了很多事情，很多我付出了很多心血和努。。。”

（中文是想要表达的意思，翻译不必和中文完全一样）

中文部分：
最近在我上发生了很多事情，很多我付出了很多心血和努力的事，最后却没有得到好的结果。这让我非常的失望甚至是有一点绝望。所以听了你的故事很有感触。我愿意相信一切都会好起来的，只是真的希望那一天早一点到来。同样，也希望你的生活一切顺利。

我的翻译：
Actually, there a lot of terrible things happen on me recently. A lot of things which I worked very hard on it but did not get a good result. This makes me not only sad but also despair. That's why I'm so touching when I hear your story. I try to believe everything will be fine and I truly hope it could come soon. I also hope everything on you is OK.

Answer 1

错误太多了哦

actually换成recently，后面的recently删掉

there后面加have been

happen on换成happen to

下一句中的a lot of 冗余去掉

worked very hard on it把那个it删掉

a good result换成good results

This makes me not only sad but also despair.
改成This makes very disappointed even a little bit despair

touching换成touched，hear换成heard

I try to believe
改成I'd like to believe

hope后面改成that day could come sooner

最后一句改成same here，I wish everything‘s going on fine with you too

追问

Recently, there have been a lot of terrible things happen to me. Things which I worked very hard on but did not get good results. This makes very disappointed even a little bit despair. That's why I'm so touched when I heard your story. I'd like to believe everything will be fine and I truly hope that day could come sooner. Same here，I wish everything's going on fine with you too.

追答

差不多了

Answer 2

Recently，much business has visited me. Sufficient effort and energy as I paid, the desirable result, ultimately, didn't wave to me,which disppointed me and even desperated.So,I'm moved by your story.Everything ，I believe ，will restore immediately and hope your life smooth.
希望采纳！

Answer 3

Actually, there's something happened to me recently. A lot of staffs I worked very hard on turned to have a bad result. This makes me sad or evenb despair. That's why I was so touching when I heared your story. I believe that everything will be fine.But I really hope that day comes sooner. Also, wish you everything OK.