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帮我看一下语法对不对

My name is ㅇㅇ. I am 16years old and I am from China. I used to be study in China , but now I immigrated to KOrea since I was 5. I studied in local school from kindergarten to junior one
, and I transferred to international school cause I wanted to learn English. I am not really good at English (especially grammar), Even though I am in international school.
My family is made up of my father, mother, a brother who is 2 years older and me. I love my family so much. I always love to have conversation with my mom about school life.
I am a Christian. My weakness is that I am a little bit shy, and pusillanimous. I don’t like to eat onions, and garlic. My family like to travel around so we’ve been went to 15 countries. I like to travel, but unfortunately I have car dizzy. My strength is that I can speak Chinese like native speaker, and I like to laugh. I have several hobbies including watching movies (especially sad movies), shopping, chatting, and listening to music. Also I like animals such as: dog, cat, monkey, and rabbit etc…
Consequently I hope my new host family will like me, I’ll try to correct all my bad habits (such as getting up late and lazy), and I will be very appreciate them that they chose me as their family. Also I hope I can do well in USA.

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我的名字叫ㅇㅇ。我16岁,我来自中国。我以前是在中国学习,但是现在我移民到韩国,因为我是5。我在当地学校从幼儿园到初中学习
,我转到国际学校因为我想学英语。我不擅长英语(特别是语法),尽管我在国际学校。
我的家庭是由我的父亲,母亲,兄弟是谁和我大2岁。我爱我的家人。我总是喜欢和我妈妈谈论学校生活。
我是一个基督徒。我的缺点是,我有点害羞,胆怯的。我不喜欢吃洋葱和大蒜。我的家人喜欢环游所以我们一直去15个国家。我喜欢旅行,但不幸的是我的车头晕。我的力量,我能讲汉语和母语一样,,我喜欢笑。我有几个爱好包括看电影(特别是悲伤的电影),购物,聊天,听音乐。我也喜欢动物,如:狗,猫,猴子、兔子等…
因此我希望我的新主人的家人会喜欢我,我会尽量改正我所有的坏习惯(比如起床晚,懒),和我将会非常感激他们,他们选择了我家人。我也希望我能在美国。

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