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Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.请..

Directions: Write an English composition according to the instructions given below in Chinese.请仔细观察图片，描述图片内容，并以生活中发生的一件事情说明图片所说明的内涵。 注意：词数不少于120。

Answer 1

In the picture, two goats are tied to each other with a rope. They both see some grass in opposite directions, and try to pull to get their own food. They are unsuccessful, because the rope is too short to allow them to eat the food at the same time. However, if they decide to cooperate and eat the grass on the left first, and then the grass on the right, they will both be able to get their food. Several days ago, two of my friends had a fierce quarrel. Both of them hold their own view without considering the other’s. One of them wanted to go to the bookshop first, while the other wanted to finish their project first. Later, I gave them a suggestion that they should go to the book shop first, where they could not only buy the book, but also find some useful information, which might help the other better their project. Therefore, cooperation is better than conflict. Remember that sometimes our goal is not that only we get something and the other gets nothing, but that all people get what they want. All in all, only good cooperation will benefit everyone.

试题分析：考查开放性作文写作,开放性作文给出了一个话题，并有部分的文字提示。给考生自由发挥的余地较大。对于考生的综合能力要求较高，要求考生有很强的谋篇布局的能力和组织要点的能力。在完成开放性作文时，首先要选择自己熟悉的短语或者句型，在你的能力范围之内，选择句式时要赋予变化，因为这样你才可以更好的驾驭。同时也要选择合适的连接词，把各个要点组织成一个完整的整体，在发表个人观点的时候，可以使用谚语来提升整个文章的档次和文采，也能增加得高分的可能性。 【亮点说明】范文主题明确，夹叙夹议，在语言上用了一些常见的短语not only…but also不但…而且…，All in all,总的来说。句式上也是富有变化：because the rope is too short to allow them to eat the food at the same time. 这句话用了too …to…结构，One of them wanted to go to the bookshop first, while the other wanted to finish their project first. 这句话用了while表示对比，Later, I gave them a suggestion that they should go to the book shop first, where they could not only buy the book, but also find some useful information, which might help the other better their project. 这句话用了同位语从句，非限制性定语从句。Remember that sometimes our goal is not that only we get something and the other gets nothing, but that all people get what they want.这句话用了not..but…结构，和表语从句。