Question

帮我看一下有没有错误 英语小作文

do you know a hamster ?thery are a kind of pet. they come from siberia.they are short-bodied,with tails much shorter than body tength,and have small furry ears,short stocks legs,and wide feet.hamsters are nocturnal animals .they are active at night .they are cute and of small size and are easy to take care of.however,they almost sleep all day.as they are small in size ,many people especially young kids ,likes to keep them as pets.they can be kept in cager and be easily taken care of.(先悬，再赏）
这些不算，语法的

Answer 1

do you know a hamster---do you know hamsters.(因为后面你都是用“they”来叙述,这里最好复数)
tength---body's length 是不是打错了？

and are easy to take care of--and easy to be taken care of
they almost sleep all day-- sleep all the day around (你想表达的是整天都睡觉吧？)
many people especially young kids ,likes to keep them as pets---many people,especially young kids,like to make them their pets . (many people 后面的逗号很必要，另外你想表达的是把它们作为动物来养，对吧？keep them as pets 有点别扭，不是很地道，用make them their pets 更好。)

不知道你是几年级，如果是初中生的，能写出这样的文章还是不错的

希望对你有帮助！

Answer 2

1.句首大写

Answer 3

稍微改了一下，然后调换了一些语句的顺序。
Do you know hamster? It is a kind of pet. It comes from Siberia. It is short-bodied, with tails much shorter than body length, and it has small furry ears, short legs, and wide feet. Hamsters are nocturnal animals. They are active at night. However they almost sleep all day.They are cute and of small size .At the same time, they are easy to take care of. They can be kept in cage.As they are small in size, many people especially young kids, would like to keep them as pets.