Question

求英语大神，用倒装句完成下列翻译，谢谢！！！！， 我一回到学校就听到了令人震惊的消息：一名两岁小

求英语大神，用倒装句完成下列翻译，谢谢！！！！，

我一回到学校就听到了令人震惊的消息：一名两岁小女孩悦悦被一辆面包车碾压（roll over）两次。不仅司机从现场逃跑，而且路过的18位路人无一人伸出援手。直到一位老奶奶试着救女孩却失败，人们才意识到后果的严重。我是如此的愤怒以至于我忍不住给你们写这封信，我认为只有当我们所以人都提升道德感，社会才会和谐。

Answer 1

No sooner had I got to the school did I hear the shocking news: Yueyue, a two year's old little girl was twice rolled over by a minibus. Not only did the driver run away from the scene, none of the eighteen passers-by helped even a bit. It was not until an old lady tried to rescue the girl but failed did the people realized the severe consequence of the accident. I am so angry that I can't help writing to you. I believe (that) the society wouldn't in harmony without the moral consciousness of all of us is raised.

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but failed前后各加一个逗号。

Answer 2

here came the astonishing news when i returned school that a two-year old girl named yueyue was rolled over twice by a minibus.not only the driver went away but also the eighteen people passed by without any help.not until an old woman tried to save her life but failed that the seriousness was realized.so angry i am that i cannot help but write to you,only the moral feeling is improved can the sociaty be more harmonious.