写作思路：
正文：
I have a happy and warm family. There are: hardworking mother, able father, smart sister, and lovely me.
我有一个幸福、温馨的家庭。有：勤劳的妈妈、能干的爸爸、聪明的姐姐，还有可爱的我。
My father is a worker. He gets up early and works late every day. Sometimes I came back at 12:00 p.m. my father worked so hard every day for my sister and I to study hard. Dad, I will study hard! My mother is a qualified housewife. Every day, my sister and I have to escape my mother's nagging.
我的爸爸是一名工人，每天起早贪黑的工作。有时到了晚上12：00才回来，爸爸每天这么辛苦的工作，都是为了我和姐姐能够好好学习。爸爸我一定会努力学习的!我的妈妈是一个合格的家庭主妇，每天，我和姐姐都要逃避妈妈的唠叨。
When she comes back from work every day, I almost recite the words: have you finished your homework? Let your sister check and check when it is finished, eat quickly, read some books after dinner, go to bed early, get up early tomorrow, don't be late for school Well, if my mother doesn't nag at night, she's going to nag my sister and me out of the cocoon.
她每天下班回来唠叨的话，我都快背下来了：作业写完了没有?写完了让你姐姐检查检查，快点吃饭，一会儿吃完饭再看会儿书，早点睡觉，明天好得早起呢，上学别迟到了……唉，妈妈如果不唠叨晚上都不着觉，都快把我和姐姐的耳朵唠叨出茧子了。
My sister is a smart girl. She was admitted to high school last year. But my sister is very fat. You see, she is only 18 years old and has more than 120 kg. Well, no one can help it. However, my sister has designed a weight loss table for herself, such as: getting up in the morning, turning hula hoops for an hour, and not eating meat at noon.
我的姐姐是个聪明的女孩，这不去年考高中，她就被录取了。不过我姐姐很胖你看才18岁就120多斤，唉，谁也没办法，不过我姐姐给自己设计了一个减肥表，比如：早上起床转一个小时的呼啦圈，中午不吃荤之类的。
However, my sister couldn't hold on to it for a few days. That night, my sister ate the refrigerator empty and gained a lot of weight. Alas, who will help her? I am the happy fruit of the family. If I am not here, the home will be deserted. Only I am at home will be full of laughter and happiness. Therefore, my father will not let me go out. Alas, I am bored at home all day It's a way! I run out to play quietly. Sometimes I run out when my father is taking a nap. Sometimes when my father is not at home, he doesn't know, ha ha.
可是这样还没几天，我姐姐就坚持不住了，那天晚上我姐姐就把冰箱吃了个空，这不体重又增重了不少，唉，谁来救救她啊!我，是家里的开心果，如果我不在，家里就冷清清的，只有我在家里才会充满欢笑与快乐，所以我爸爸就不让我出门，唉，整天闷在家里也不是个办法呀!我就悄悄的跑出去玩，有时候趁爸爸午睡的时候跑出去，有时候趁爸爸不在家的时候，反正他也不知道，哈哈。
This is my family, a family full of happiness. Welcome to my house.
这就是我的家庭，一个充满幸福的滋味的'家庭。欢迎不你来我家做客。
写作思路：不要平铺直叙地进行，要注意及时地、不断地变化描写的角度，使描写更加具体，给读者主体化之感。做到条理清楚、自然、明白，不杂乱，要倾注自己的思想感情。
My Family
Everyone has a family。 We live in it and feel very warm。 There are three persons in my family， my mother， father and I。 We live together very happily and there are many interesting stories about my family。
My father is a hard-working man。 He works as a doctor。 He always tries his best to help every， patient and make patients comfortable。 But sonetimes he works so hard that he can't remember the date。
My mother is a woman with a bad memory。 She always does a lot of housework， but sometimes she makes mistakes out of carelessness。 For example， one day， she washed clothes in the washer， after the washer finished the work， she found she hadn't filled the washer with water。
Now let me tell you a funny thing: one day， father wanted to get up early as usual， buthe wasn't able to do that， because he hadn't set the alarm clock the night before， so when he got up， he did everything in a hurry。
After father left， mother said to me mysteriously， "He will come back soon。" "Why?" I was greatly surprised。 "Because today is Sunday， his holiday!" Just as mother said， father came back home soon， and went to bed again--he was too tired。
You see， what an interesting family have! I hope that you will have one like mine， too。
我的家庭
每个人都有家。我们大家生活在那里，并从那里获取温暖。我们家有三口人，我妈妈、爸爸，还有我。我们在一起幸福地生活，我们家有许多有趣的故事。
我爸爸工作认真。他是一名医生，他总是尽他最大的努力 去帮助每一位病人，尽力使他们感觉舒服。有的时候，他工作太认真以致于忘了日期。
我妈妈是一位记性很不好的人。她总是做很多家务活，但有时却因为她的粗心而做错事。比如说，有一天，她用洗衣机洗衣服，最后却发现自己忘了在洗衣机中放水。现在让我告诉你一件有趣的事：一天，爸爸想像平常一样早起，但是由于他前天没有设置闹钟，所以他起晚了，当他起床时，他匆匆忙忙地洗漱完毕就去上班了。
爸爸离开后，妈妈神秘地对我说：“他一会儿一定会回来的。”“为什么?”我十分惊讶。“因为今天是星期天，他的假日。”妈妈正说着的时候，不一会儿，爸爸就回来了，并且再一次上床睡觉了——因为他太累了。
你瞧，多么有趣的家庭!我希望你也有一个像我一样的家庭。
扩展资料：
英语作文写作方法
1、确定中心，写出深意。我们要着于挖掘所写事件中含有的生活哲理或找出它闪光的地方，反复思考，确定文章的中心思想。即善于从普通的小事中写出深意来。
2、文章的六要素要交待清楚。一件事情的发生，离不开时间、地点、人物、事情的起因、经过和结果这六方面，即常说的“六要素”，只有交待清楚这几方面，才能使读者对所叙述的事，有个清楚、全面的了解。
3、言之有序，条理要清楚。根据所述时间选择合理的顺序来安排材料。一般叙事顺叙、倒叙和插叙三种。
4、详略得当，突出重点。一般事件的材料有主次之分，能体现文章中心的材料是主要材料，这部分要详写，次要内容可略写或不写，主次分明，给读者以深刻的印象。
5、要把事情写具体。能不能把事情写具体，那就看你是不是善于把事情一层层展开记叙，即把事情分为几个阶段，在这几个阶段中写出事情的发展变化。这样，文章的内容才会具体、生动。
My father works a long way from home.And my mother is a housewife.My brother is a student who studies in the school.
In a word,my family is full of happiness.I have a very happy family.There are four people in my family--my parents ,my younger brother and I.My fathther is working in another city,so he is always very busy.
I have a happy family.There are my father,my mother,my brother and I.
My father works a long way from home.And my mother is a housewife.My brother is a student who studies in the school.
In a word,my family is full of happiness.I have a very happy family.There are four people in my family--my parents ,my younger brother and I.My fathther is working in another city,so he is always very busy.
编辑于 2015-10-05
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