Question

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He had such quiet eyes

She did not realise

They were two pools of lies

Layered with thinnest ice

To her, those wuiet eyes

Were breathing desolate sighs

Imploring her to be nice

And to render him paradise

If only she’d been wise

And had listened to the advice

Never to compromise

With pleasure-seeking guys

She’d be free from ‘the hows and whys’

Now here’s a bit of advice

Be sure that nice really nice

Then you’ll never be losing at dice

Though you lose your heart once or twice

Answer 1

He had such quiet eyes 他的眼神如此静寂，

She did not realise 使她不曾有这样的认识：

They were two pools of lies 两人都是谎言两池，

Layered with thinnest ice 覆盖着厚厚的冰层。

To her, those wuiet eyes 她认为那幽暗的双眼

Were breathing desolate sighs 散发着孤单的叹息，

Imploring her to be nice 乞求她能成全美意，

And to render him paradise 将天堂给予。

If only she’d been wise 只要她曾明智，

And had listened to the advice 当初听从建议，

Never to compromise 绝不不倾心于

With pleasure-seeking guys 寻欢作乐的男子，

She’d be free from ‘the hows and whys’她就不会不停地解释。

Now here’s a bit of advice 所以请听从以下建议：

Be sure that nice really nice 请确保甄别好美意，

Then you’ll never be losing at dice 这样你才不会失意，

Though you lose your heart once or twice 即便难免会经历几次伤心的遭遇。

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Answer 2

楼上的翻译还成