Question

大家帮帮我修改一下稿子。。英语好的进！！我急用，我急得都快哭了，明天下午就要用。大家帮帮忙呀！！！

大家帮帮我修改一下稿子。。英语好的进！！急呀！急呀，急呀！！！
我急用，我急得都快哭了，明天下午就要用。
大家帮帮忙呀
需修改
In the past I was a shy girl until last year I took part in this competition .I know that confidence is a form of courage.
Last year our whole class took part in this competition .That was my first time to take part in this competition.To my surprise I entered in the preliminary contest. However, starting from the semi-final is an oral examination.I was very afraid . My mother saw me and kindly said to me: "Never mind, this is just a try. Do not be afraid,and be confident " So I have confidence, and we practised and practised.Ten days ago I took part in the competition.Before the conpetition start my mum said to me :`Don’t be afraid.You are the best! I know you are a brave girl. And you know confidence is a form of courage.’Then I smiled to my mother.I Walked into the competition field with a smile too.I must be Confident.Keep smile.’I said to myself. It was my turn to give a speech.I was still a bit afraid and worried.I started my speech with a trembling voice.Suddenly I forgot some words.That was unlucky! What should I do now? I remembered what my mother said . confidence is a form of courage.So I must be Confident. I smiled again.And I found all audience looked at me friendlily. I kept on wy speech without reciting the original speech.In the end all audience gave me big hands. I also entered in the final.
After last year’s talent copetition I found I can speak English like some contestants on TV. Therefore I became confident girl. So today I stand here again and talk about it.

请大家帮我修改一下这篇演讲稿。请翻译一下
鼓足勇气（）
谢谢大家了！！

Answer 1

在过去我是一个害羞的女孩,直到去年我参加了这次比赛。我知道,信心是勇气的一种形式。
去年我们全班参加了这次竞赛的帐单,是我第一次参加这样的比赛。令我吃惊的是我进入预赛中。然而,从半决赛是口试。我感到很害怕。我妈妈看到我,请对我说:“没关系,这就是一种尝试。不要害怕,要有信心”,所以我有信心,我们练习,并实行了。10天前我参加了此次比赛。2005年6月前开始我的妈妈对我说:“不要害怕。你是最棒的!我知道你是一个勇敢的女孩。你知道,信心是一种courage.’然后我笑了我的母亲。我走进赛场和一个也微笑。我一定要有自信。保持笑容。我对自己说。这次该轮到我来做一个演讲。我还是有点害怕与担心。我开始了我的演说以发抖的声音。突然,我忘记了一些单词。那是倒霉!现在我应该怎么做?我想起我妈说。信心是勇气的一种形式。所以我必须要有信心才行。我又笑了。而且我发现了所有观众看着我的确有。我不停的王寅演讲没有吟诵《原始语音。最终所有的观众给我很大的手。我也进入了决赛。
去年的人才copetition后我发现我可以讲一口流利的英语就像一些参赛者在电视上。因此我变得自信的女孩。所以今天我站在这里再聊一聊。

Answer 2

I HAVE ALWAYS BEEN a shy girl until last year, WHEN I took part in this competition .I know that confidence is a form of courage.
Last year our whole class took part in this competition .That was my first time TAKING part in this competition.To my surprise, I ENTERED THE preliminary contest. However, starting from the semi-final is an oral examination. I was very afraid. My mother saw me and kindly said to me: "Never mind, this is just a try. Do not be afraid,and be confident " HEARING THAT, I GAINED confidence, and we practised and practised. Ten days ago I took part in the competition. Before the conpetition startED, my mum said to me ,`Don’t be afraid.You are the best! I know you are a brave girl. And you know, confidence is a form of courage.’ Then I smiled AT my mother. I Walked (ONTO THE STAGE)[competition field有点奇怪] with a smile too. I must be Confident. Keep smilING.’I said to myself. It was my turn to give a speech.I was still a bit afraid and worried.I started my speech with a trembling voice.Suddenly I forgot some words. HOW unlucky! What should I do now? I remembered what my mother said . confidence is a form of courage.So I must be Confident. I smiled again.And I found THE audience lookING at me friendlily. I CONTINUED MY speech without reciting the original speech. In the end THE audience gave me big hands. I also entered INTO the final.
After last year’s talent copetition I found THAT I can speak English like some contestants on TV. Therefore I became A confident girl. So today I'M STANDING HERE AGAIN AND TELLING U ABOUT MY STORY.

Answer 3

I was a shy girl in the past until i took part in this competition. I know confidence is a form of courage.
Last year, our whole class attended the competition. Though it is my first time but luckily i entered the preliminary contest. The semi-final was an oral test. I was very nervous. My mother noticed and said to me kindly: "Never mind, dear, it is just a try. Do not be afraid and be confident!" She gave me the power and we practised and practised. After ten days, i entered the competition. My mum told me before competition started that " You are the best, my brave girl. And you know confidence is a form of courage." I smiled to her and walked into the room with a smile on my face. Just keep smiling. Finally, it was my turn to give the speech. I was still a bit afraid that my voice trembled. Suddenly i forgot some words. I calmed down and remembered mon's words. Then i smiled again and i found all audience looked at me friendly. I kept on my speech without reciting the original speech. In the end, i got big applause. I was lucky to enter the final.
After this talent competition i found i can also speak English like the contestants on TV shows. Therefore, i get my confidence. Today i stand here and talk about this experience again.
希望采纳。